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PSN: Xenerd Well this is my first post and it's for my first level: The Gold Ship. I started this level a while back when LittleBigPlanet came out, but never finished it for some reason. I finally manage to get back to it and finish it. The level contain some platforming, simple puzzles, and a boss. Feedbacks are welcome! http://img24.imageshack.us/img24/5990/aphotoe.jpg http://img9.imageshack.us/img9/245/aphoto1e.jpg http://img9.imageshack.us/img9/7685/aphoto2r.jpg http://img9.imageshack.us/img9/2637/aphoto5w.jpg

2009-03-22 18:07:00 Author: Xener Posts: 2

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Hey! I have to say that that was amazing! It was really well done for your very first level, and really reminded me of some of the MM levels, with its simplicity, and cheerfulness. Everything had a cute charm to it, and as I said, a MM look. (But you didn't use any MM objects so that's WAY better! Originality FTW!) I loved the puzzles, as they were easy, yet not too easy. The platforming was great, and well done, and it wasn't just normal platforming either! Everything worked perfectly, so I didn't have to restart it, which is always a plus. The boss was great and original, and pretty easy, which is ok! I loved the little boat ride at the end, it was great looking and well done. You were like me when I made my first level, using shapes and guesses to trim things and detail things. Using the corner edit tool is REALLY handy, and can turn your square into the Mona Lisa! Also, the grid is really useful, allowing you to make nice clean lines and the such. When you had to drag the boxes over to the corner in the small house, there was a little bump sticking out of the floor, it wasn't impossible to pass, but it was still there. That's a place the grid comes in handy. I've given this level 5 stars and a heart! Great job, and I can't wait for more of your levels!

2009-03-22 21:21:00 Author: Kog Posts: 2358

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Thank you for the feedback!

2009-03-22 21:47:00 Author: Xener Posts: 2

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Looks cool, added it on my "to play" list. You should expect some feedback from me in round about a week.

2009-03-22 22:11:00 Author: olit123 Posts: 1341

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Nice level. Very simple and pleasant to look at. The puzzle were very easy, but that's fine for this type of level. In the boss part, I would propably change the material of the platforms to something else than spunge, so it becomes easier to grab the switches on the boss. Sure, it would make it easier, but then add some more challange in different way.. Maybe the player has to do something to make the platforms go up, or something else. Please checkout my level "Save Die Reload!", user: "CarlsenJeppe", thread https://lbpcentral.lbp-hub.com/index.php?t=t=9714

2009-03-22 22:16:00 Author: CarlsenJeppe Posts: 67

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