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Star Wars-Based Level by New But Experienced Creator

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Hello everyone! As I said in my introduction to this forum, I've been playing LBP offline for almost five years now. It gave me a lot of time to hone my skills as a creator, however I haven't had much interaction with the community yet! So I thought I'd ask for feedback on a level of mine which I consider my best, based (very loosely) on the Dagobah scenes in Star Wars: The Empire Strikes Back. I'll offer feedback on any level in return, though I can't promise it'll be soon after you reply, as unfortunately I don't have a lot of time to play online.

(P.S. Sorry if I did part of this thread wrong and/or accidentally broke any rules. If I have, I'll try and fix it as soon as possible.)
http://lbp.me/v/q3r13y3

EDIT: That's odd, I put in the lbp.me level identification, but nothing's showing up. Guess I'll have to do it manually:


Star Wars: Dagobah by TropesForever https://lbp.me/v/q3r13y3/topreviews?p=1&l=12

http://i4.lbp.me/img/ft/004db9a52bd747085476d6e8f36da4dc63ac55ad.jpg
http://i5.lbp.me/img/ft/615127fbb54eda2b99dd614d66dd491a1e94aaf7.jpg
http://ic.lbp.me/img/ft/8dcc45ede982023e70d4ea14eb825ae34fecdef6.jpg
http://i9.lbp.me/img/ft/c199a6c9f469f60cb390f1fb0747d4e966ff72f0.jpg
http://i9.lbp.me/img/ft/4291f125a6b5024ce7594591f03dd40afbb61e20.jpg
http://i3.lbp.me/img/ft/d03c69d4c1cb5282538f8bba52953dcc17a02bb4.jpg		2019-01-06 23:41:00

Author:
TropesForever
Posts: 12

Hey there! When posting a level in here, it's always recommended to provide a level link and maybe a few pictures. I know you're knew to the online portion of LBP so you're probably wondering, "level link?" What the heck is that? LittleBigPlanet has LBP.me where everyone who plays LBP has a profile and the best part, they're levels are there so people can queue them up right from their computer! I love it! I visit LBP.me like every day. Here's the link to your level and I'll add it to my queue. http://lbp.me/v/q3r13y3

EDIT: I see you were editing as I was typing! Yeah, that level thing for LBPC doesn't quite work right since LBP3 came along. You have to do it manually.

EDIT 2: I can help you out with one other thing though. To put a picture right into the thread, 1st go to the picture in LBP.me, click on it, then click it again so it's the ONLY thing on the screen and copy that URL. Then in your post, click on the little picture frame in the toolbar, paste your link, UNCHECK the box that says Retrieve file and reference locally, and click OK. Then it's in the post like thus:

http://i4.lbp.me/img/ft/004db9a52bd747085476d6e8f36da4dc63ac55ad.jpg		2019-01-06 23:54:00

Author:
biorogue
Posts: 8424

I fixed the images now. Thank you for clearing that up and helping. 2019-01-07 04:34:00

Author:
TropesForever
Posts: 12

Hi I just tested your level,
I liked the Saber lazer even if the desing is a little rudimentary, being able to push the lazer I think it's great. And I find a little lack of music during the fight of Dark Vader.
if you want I have two star wars music: imperial march and throne room theme song.		2019-01-07 18:59:00

Author:
Mouflarr56
Posts: 18

Thanks for the feedback! And thanks for the music items too, thank you, I'll take them! Do you have them in a level, or will you use the "send item" thing which I've heard about? If you do, I'll probably need it explained to me first, because I'm dumb.

Either way, thanks! I really appreciate it. Do you have a level you want me to provide feedback for in return?		2019-01-07 20:32:00

Author:
TropesForever
Posts: 12

Queued2019-01-07 21:40:00

Author:
L-I-M-I
Posts: 611

I’ll send you the two sequencers as soon as I log in at the end of the day (I’m in France). You can download them by going to your create mode. You go in the settings (option) you click on message at the bottom, you click on the game data (your Cados), and you will find them in your community objects. if it doesn’t work, I’ll have to try to join You to give it to you or I’ll create a level. If you want to test my level click on my banner just below .2019-01-08 08:43:00

Author:
Mouflarr56
Posts: 18

Thanks for that explanation! I understand now.

Also, queued your level! I can't wait to play it.		2019-01-08 19:44:00

Author:
TropesForever
Posts: 12

I sent you a friend invitation so I could send you your litte big present. 2019-01-09 07:59:00

Author:
Mouflarr56
Posts: 18

Hi TropesForever,

I'm looking forward to try your StarWars based level. May the force be with me!

Many greetings, Jürgen^^		2019-01-09 11:30:00

Author:
CuriousSack
Posts: 3981

I accepted the invitation! Thank you.2019-01-09 21:32:00

Author:
TropesForever
Posts: 12

have could you download the three music?2019-01-10 16:29:00

Author:
Mouflarr56
Posts: 18

Nope, sorry. It didn't show up. Could you try sending them again, please? I'm not sure, but it might work this time.2019-01-10 20:37:00

Author:
TropesForever
Posts: 12

no you were entitled to only one trial.
lol I laugh, I'll send you this tonight, or I meet you , we'll see ....
have a good day!		2019-01-11 10:27:00

Author:
Mouflarr56
Posts: 18

Okay! Thank you for this. It's really nice of you 2019-01-11 20:24:00

Author:
TropesForever
Posts: 12

you can recup the music here:
https://lbp.me/v/q04q3kq/topreviews?p=1&l=12
https://lbp.me/v/m435cj/topreviews?p=1&l=12		2019-01-12 08:52:00

Author:
Mouflarr56
Posts: 18

Added to my queue.2019-01-16 00:29:00

Author:
LittleBigDes
Posts: 920


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