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This is a side story to Unexplained which takes place after the curse has been lifted on the town. You play as Izzy Bella Clarke, the daughter of Ayame Clarke and Matthew Clarke. Description: Izzy, the daughter of a hero, has disappeared five months ago. Now, she's come back. For revenge. Izzy: The town's quiet. The curse must have been lifted. Izzy: Let's see if Ayame's still alive then. Convenient thing is that Ayame is the first person you encounter. Ayame: Are you Izzy Clarke? Izzy: Are you Ayame Clarke? Ayame: Yes. Izzy: Then I trust you--I'm Izzy. Ayame: W-Why did you run away? Izzy: I was dragged into a portal. Izzy: Where's Father? Ayame: Oh, Matthew? Izzy: Mm-hm. Ayame: Check the mayor's place. Izzy: Thanks. Ayame: Anything for our daughter. For the remake, I think I'll change the dialogue and Ayame's personality. And clothing. Next is another scene that may or may not be changed in the terms of dialogue and character acting. Dylan: We could try, but it'll cost your life. Matthew Clarke: Anything to bring her back. Dylan: You remind me of my little brother. Matthew Clarke: Well, I'm glad we have some alikeness. Izzy: Ahem. Matthew Clarke: Izzy? Izzy: Yes. Matthew Clarke: O-Oh... Izzy: Sorry I left. Some guy dragged me into the portal for Clocks. Matthew Clarke: Reasonable. Dylan: Is Phillip alive? Izzy: He's immortal. Dylan: *Sighs heavily* Matthew Clarke: What are you here for? Izzy: Study in combat. Magic can't always help me. Matthew Clarke: Dylan can teach you. Izzy: Alright. In an effort to bring the level back to life, I will polish the story and such. Somehow add RIn and Len into the equation even though there will be little input to dialogue on their part (as Izzy may or may not even need the magic training as she went through Clocks, which may or may not be Dylan's son/younger brother as I don't really remember the storyline). Here's what I think that needs to be polished; Character design. If I change something here that's established in the main Unexplained, then I may or may not have to change what's in Unexplained AND Sins, if necessary. The story around Phillip. It's meant to be a secret between the main cast (with the exception of Fairy and Mary), the only exception is Dylan, who is just a side character. Implementing every main character into the story. Fairy and Mary doesn't have much of a use except gossip. In fact, maybe Izzy and Fairy and Mary can establish a best friend status and Izzy can go to them for juicy gossip? Maybe Izzy spares Fairy and Mary for their usefulness? And there's still Rin and Len that needs to be implemented somehow other than being a target for Izzy's blood-thirsty rampage. Maybe time travel? Any suggestions will be taken into consideration. <3

2016-05-14 18:44:00 Author: Ashe Posts: 49

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