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Noby Noby BOY

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I'm trying to get better at this painting stuff, so I figured BOY would be easy and fun.

http://t3hjake.deviantart.com/art/BOY-114551245

Comments are appreciated.
2009-03-01 22:08:00

Author:
Sack-Jake
Posts: 1153


Good job. Make another one with a long colourful tail! 2009-03-01 22:19:00

Author:
Killian
Posts: 2575


Right, comments and critique:

One thing that stands out to me is the blushing on his face. It feels out of place.
The pink colour is a little too bold, try a paler pink colour.
Because of the way BOY is looking, the perspective seems odd. Try maybe adding his back body and the visible legs on that,

However, the expression is spot on, and the shading is very well done!


ALSO BOY HAS HAD A DAYDREAM, CHECK OUT WEB WEB BOY AT o--o.jp !!!
2009-03-01 22:21:00

Author:
LFF
Posts: 434


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