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Crystal Cavern

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Hey guys! This is my first level, which is called Crystal Cavern. It's a short level that tours you in an underground cave. There are also hidden bubbles scattered throughout the level.




http://i8.lbp.me/img/bl/278fa7f302ba140713fd6ad4e782c6161748e28b.png
Crystal Cavern (http://lbp.me/v/qtqf0pw)



Here's some pictures to give you an idea of it:




http://id.lbp.me/img/ft/8fdf1e4a665f878f6bbc04e6e8fa059cfad689fe.jpg

http://ie.lbp.me/img/ft/f4e5a0fe497dbccec97cc82e0d476d30ebb1db30.jpg



I'd love to get some feedback and constructive criticism to help me improve on my future levels. Hope you have a great time playing it! 		2014-11-01 12:54:00

Author:
Verschleppen
Posts: 15

Looks cool!
Queued
HUgssz~		2014-11-01 14:11:00

Author:
DT-KAOSU
Posts: 32

As a first level this is very well done. However stylistically I felt that it was a bit unfinished due to lack of point bubbles.

Scattering some bubbles about the place would help with guiding the player about where to go next. Some sections felt like I had ended up somewhere by accident. Dropping down onto a platform and getting some points would help with knowing I was going in the right direction.		2014-11-09 03:11:00

Author:
Mr_Fusion
Posts: 1799

As a first level this is very well done. However stylistically I felt that it was a bit unfinished due to lack of point bubbles.

Scattering some bubbles about the place would help with guiding the player about where to go next. Some sections felt like I had ended up somewhere by accident. Dropping down onto a platform and getting some points would help with knowing I was going in the right direction.

I'd keep that in mind. 		2014-11-09 07:42:00

Author:
Verschleppen
Posts: 15

Queued! I like caverns! And levels. And crystal... and bubbles... and cool levels... This must be cool2014-11-16 19:11:00

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TenebrisNemo
Posts: 11336


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