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Johan

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Sup gangsters, I have once again made a new level! It's about beavers and everything!
http://lbp.me/v/qt737n6

http://i0.lbp.me/img/ft/ad0a2ed1bd8bda8a43aff59ce2c7214c7664d2f6.jpg
http://i6.lbp.me/img/ft/0b6c95761e3e44b87995e1f3562088cd9c8d589f.jpg

I know I know it looks better in real life. Those pics make it look eh.

But anyway, here's a better description just for you guys. <3

So once again some beaver has sent you on a nonsense adventure for some reason. Join him as you guys make weird jokes and go through platforms in a forest or something.
I suck at descriptions
It's a platformer.

I will try to do f4f whenever. Enjoy.
http://lbp.me/v/qt737n6		2014-09-03 17:19:00

Author:
morris6267
Posts: 144

looks great to me! Be awhile before I can play it though. YLOD has got me. 2014-09-03 18:41:00

Author:
biorogue
Posts: 8424

Thanks, I just think everything looks way too dark in these pics. You can see stuff better when you're actually playing it though.

Shipt, that sucks. All right then, prepare yourself for whenever you fix it. 		2014-09-03 18:46:00

Author:
morris6267
Posts: 144

This level has a thew great ideas which get exocuted however, At times this level is unnecessarly difficult and with no clear instruction renders some parts completely unplayible like that rotating bit it is just too difficult to figure out and get passed it. Also with that part of the level you can easily fall out of the level I know there is a failsafe to prevent this but it breaks emersion. The only reason I took the time to finish that part is to give this level a fair review. I think this level tries to hard to be funny and has too much dialogue especially for a level in which the entire story of the level involves getting clothes for a beaver. The chase scene at the end is pretty decent kind of gives a weird atmosphhere music suggests that it is meant to be a tense chase but when you see what is chasing you and how the level reacts to it you it sucks out all the tension. I think you should change the music to something more suited like https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=arKFeqg4kGk.

In it's current state I do not recommend this level. Which is a real shame because there were such great ideas in terms of the gameplay but it is far too frustrating to get through. Also there is too much too read. However if you give more room for error, better direction and a lot less reading this could be a very good level. Don't get me wrong originally I thought ok there is a wordy introducation but the level's constantly intrupted by very long convos with the beaver which breaks the pacing too much. Sorry too sound really negative but I am harsh because this level has such protential to be great but it is let down by a thew too many issues which just sap the attention from the player.		2014-09-03 22:39:00

Author:
Jonarrthan
Posts: 310

Thanks kid. Ah I was worried some parts would've been too hard. You can fall out of that part? I must've forgotten to add invisible gas.. As for the lengthy dialog, that's sorta what I was going for. My stories have never made any sense. I can see how there might be too much though. Like half the jokes are stuff only a few people will get. but that makes it funny to me... eh, the ending was supposed to be cheap. I don't take it seriously, even the music at the beginning wasn't fitting.

Nah, I like honest responses. I'll try to make things easier to understand. Honestly though, I care more about the crappy dialog than the actual level.		2014-09-03 22:58:00

Author:
morris6267
Posts: 144

Nah, I like honest responses. I'll try to make things easier to understand. Honestly though, I care more about the crappy dialog than the actual level.

Not crappy, Just too much of it. First time it isn't too bad but if you want to replay this level for it's interesting gameplay then your stuck reading through it over. If possible just giving an option to disable it at the start would suffice.		2014-09-04 00:02:00

Author:
Jonarrthan
Posts: 310

Intentionally crappy I meant. I even call it low effort in the level. Whatever though, I'll fix that stuff tonight.

And I'm guessing you want f4f right? You didn't really say you did, but I'm guessing you do.		2014-09-04 00:25:00

Author:
morris6267
Posts: 144

I plead for you to re-work/double-check one of the obstacles early on in the level.

http://ic.lbp.me/img/ft/a4cbefee17125894e8617148428ebe0064760f9a.jpg

You shoot straight up at the electrified pillars, and the ground mega-launches you skywards so high you can see the cutoff of the trees. The second one shoots you so high it's impossible to proceed. It shoots out onto a tree branch in the background that's above the the intended level borders, and there is gas preventing you from jumping down. I tried this part 30-40 some odd times, and on the few times I made it past the first one, the second one would always launch me out of the level in this manner.		2014-09-04 00:45:00

Author:
Kato
Posts: 732

Ahh I suck at explaining stuff. See, on that part you're supposed to shoot the green thing while you're jumping/in the air. That way the ground rises without launching you into the electric thing.

I'll fix this in a bit.

I have added a cheap last minute way to skip the intro and also added barriers to prevent people from doing that obstacle the wrong way. Also invisible gas I forgot to add.		2014-09-04 00:56:00

Author:
morris6267
Posts: 144

I hate most levels and I loved this one a lot because it was fun, had soul, was funny, and had soul. I didn't find anything particularly challenging and the puzzles that existed were not too hard to figure out. Unlike your last level, there was only one cheap section (and it was hilarious) and overall it felt really polished. One recommendation would be to cut down some of the dialogue as it was a bit much, but for the most part it was hilarious (especially the ending). I will commend any level that tells the player to end themselves and break into a chase mid cutscene.

I'm tired now so this is going to sound incoherent, but this level has personality and is genuine fun when most levels are generic tripe teats that the masses suck for shallow, unfulfilling nourishment. Heart Attack has fulfilled me, and I'm still smiling (welp that was raunchy).

You might like my level Esmerelda Teaches Typing. I don't even want feedback, I just think that you might enjoy it.		2014-09-04 02:32:00

Author:
bonner123
Posts: 1487

You're actually not funny. I'm a kidder. The jokes where hysterical and the platforming was top notch. I didn't really appreciate the shoe joke though ;(. (I kidd).2014-09-04 02:51:00

Author:
Unknown User

I hate most levels and I loved this one a lot because it was fun, had soul, was funny, and had soul. I didn't find anything particularly challenging and the puzzles that existed were not too hard to figure out. Unlike your last level, there was only one cheap section (and it was hilarious) and overall it felt really polished. One recommendation would be to cut down some of the dialogue as it was a bit much, but for the most part it was hilarious (especially the ending). I will commend any level that tells the player to end themselves and break into a chase mid cutscene.

I'm tired now so this is going to sound incoherent, but this level has personality and is genuine fun when most levels are generic tripe teats that the masses suck for shallow, unfulfilling nourishment. Heart Attack has fulfilled me, and I'm still smiling (welp that was raunchy).

You might like my level Esmerelda Teaches Typing. I don't even want feedback, I just think that you might enjoy it.
Thanks! It really means a lot. What part was cheap though? I don't have any idea really, except maybe the chase. That was pretty cheap. I am thinking of cutting down a bit, but only one certain part really.

I'll check it out whenever.


You're actually not funny. I'm a kidder. The jokes where hysterical and the platforming was top notch. I didn't really appreciate the shoe joke though ;(. (I kidd).
Uh huh honey
Also, Your*. Egg.
Johan.
(Jake gets it all this stupid ****)
lol		2014-09-04 03:13:00

Author:
morris6267
Posts: 144

The part that lauches you up very quickly - I think you added a sign. It was sudden and very funny, but I have a stupid sense of humour.2014-09-04 03:15:00

Author:
bonner123
Posts: 1487

Oh yeah, I added that sign really fast and didn't put any effort in it. Eh I have a stupid sense of humor too. 2014-09-04 03:52:00

Author:
morris6267
Posts: 144

And I'm guessing you want f4f right? You didn't really say you did, but I'm guessing you do.

If you want, I wouldn't mind getting more feedback on this level https://lbpcentral.lbp-hub.com/index.php?t=90830-Kingdom-of-ice-olation		2014-09-04 07:03:00

Author:
Jonarrthan
Posts: 310

Another Hilarious level by morris. Keep up the good work, friend!2014-09-05 02:51:00

Author:
Menen101
Posts: 74

I played this quite a while ago and again, just now. I love the improvements you made. The humor was amazing and I think that's what makes this level so dang good. The gameplay was good too, but the humor was really what made it the best level it could possibly be. I don't see much paintinator gameplay in levels so seeing it used so well in your level left me in awe. I honestly cant come up with anything to help you improve your level, so sorry for that.2014-09-15 23:32:00

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DawnBreaker_23
Posts: 568


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