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Applecarver Island: Fiery Descent.

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This level takes place in the middle of the storyline. I just started working on it early, since I had the inspiration at the time.

It's still a work in progress, so let me know what you think of it so far. I may add more to it, but the right inspiration or ideas have yet to hit me.

Can you find the hidden disco man?
2009-02-21 08:47:00

Author:
DarkDedede
Posts: 672


A bit short, but like you said it is a work in progress and i really like the idea of the fiery wheel. My only few problems were that:

1) There was a bit too much fire and so i wasn't exactly sure what i was trying to do or where to go sometimes

2) The wheel got a bit repetitive at times when you just had to roll it straight (maybe add some more ramps or something, not sure what you want to do)

I loved the ending where the wall is slowly crushing the wheel and overall it looks like it could become a good level.
2009-02-21 20:25:00

Author:
sharp357
Posts: 27


A bit short, but like you said it is a work in progress and i really like the idea of the fiery wheel. My only few problems were that:

1) There was a bit too much fire and so i wasn't exactly sure what i was trying to do or where to go sometimes

2) The wheel got a bit repetitive at times when you just had to roll it straight (maybe add some more ramps or something, not sure what you want to do)

I loved the ending where the wall is slowly crushing the wheel and overall it looks like it could become a good level.

I agree on all points!

I didnt fell like I was doing much by just rolling along.
Once I got up I didnt realize at first what I was supposed to do, after a few deaths I just jumped out.
I didnt find your disco man but didnt really see where he could have been and I was worried to stray by the fire

I have worked on your comments about my level as well...thanks for your views
2009-02-21 20:52:00

Author:
AJnKnox
Posts: 518


Thanks for the feedback.

Yeah I'm planning on adding some story elements to the level, as opposed to just putting arrows, but I'm waiting until I get caught up with the rest of the levels before that. This is technically about the sixth level into the storyline.
2009-02-23 00:48:00

Author:
DarkDedede
Posts: 672


Unfortunately, I have seen this wheel before... (forget where)

And I agree about too much fire. Maybe mix up some veins of non-burning dark material running through it...

And what about finding other modes of transportation other than the wheel?
2009-02-23 16:04:00

Author:
dobi6
Posts: 359


So are you suggesting that I tone down the fire a bit? I still want the fire to be the main overall theme. Do you find it hard on the eyes?2009-02-23 19:26:00

Author:
DarkDedede
Posts: 672


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