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http://i9.lbp.me/img/bl/d7989760ed88bb6e71a19867650461dc77c25237.png I shall like you present my level Story today, [REC] Project remast?riser it in not much time(weather) for affected(touched) players' largest number (French people, English people) I shall like having the opinion of the Forum on this young Introduction which presents the beginning of my project . I looks forward your to comment to be able to improved error which could have there. :star: Link of the Level : http://https://lbp.me/v/qqn0frs (http://lbp.me/v/qqn0frs) http://lbp.me/v/qqn0frs http://i9.lbp.me/img/ft/ec97ceede325505334a5e8a44ce0603a600dc18d.jpg http://ie.lbp.me/img/ft/4de65cbb060881c47333d7ae86616550eab53dbf.jpg

2014-08-03 18:50:00 Author: SackDream Posts: 29

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Hi, I watched your intro :3 It's nice done! Looks very cool and the char is belivable! I must say that car from the front, looked very very good! nice job on that shot. Than about X days? it did not display a number telling how much days also the sequence with the book looked good as well! englisch/france: It's allways a very very good idea to put more then english in a level, but I find it a bit overfilled if you put both languages in the same speechbubble. (or like you did sometimes first showing one full bubble with france and than one full one with the same text in english) I would suggest something like this: A menu where you can choose the language,and than in the game/video it only pics the language you picked in the menu at the beginning. Also if you connect your levels to form one big game, than you can let the player choose a language in level 1 and have a memorizer saving that setting and importing it in the next levels. I did that in my current level if you need an example just with german and english. you can get the memorizer from the DLC: DC Comics Level Pack. (just in case telling you) for the F4F, you don't need to do those my feedbacks are free, but if you enjoy playing other peoples levels you are free to do :3 (its the first picture in my signature, its btw the same one i mentioned with the german/english) greetings ~forces PS: i wanted to see more after the "to be continued" screen! And still do!

2014-08-03 19:45:00 Author: ForcesWerwolf Posts: 475

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The memorizer is indeed an idea that I had but for it I waits to have finished at least the Chapter 1 for create a Menu which will gather all Reprimand them as well as the introduction. Unfortunately I am not very to qualify in logic! And I have never understood how to use the memorizer but otherwise I am pleasantly surprised that it you in pleased . At the moment only one idea whom(that) I had to share this Project for all in was to divide into two them lounge textual and I understands totally that it cannot please to all! I intend to arrange that once my Chapter 1 to end

2014-08-03 19:59:00 Author: SackDream Posts: 29

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if you want help in the future just ask. other than that, good luck with your project!

2014-08-03 20:03:00 Author: ForcesWerwolf Posts: 475

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if you want help in the future just ask. other than that, good luck with your project ! I am going to try to learn on my side if I see that I do not arrive there still I shall hesitate not to ask, thank you again for your support and the interest that to carry you to my project. The tutoriel to propose by Media Molecule concerns to memorizer is not well enough to explain and I had of the evil a lot to be understood are use! I to ask in my circle of acquaintances to know more about it, thank you well <3

2014-08-03 20:20:00 Author: SackDream Posts: 29

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This is really atmospheric and nicely paced. It is a bit annoying that there is nothing else to see apart from this short movie. It look pretty exciting and I want to see more! Your english is very good (much better than my French), but a few sections did not read properly. It still made sense, but asking for help to translate the final level would be a good idea. For example; I helped Samurai-09 with his SackDancer level, and his english is pretty good, so it was just a clean up and asking a few questions to get the right tone, and I am sure there would be lots of people that would help based on how good this intro is

2014-08-16 12:01:00 Author: Mr_Fusion Posts: 1799

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Some of the effects in this level are incredible the visuals are very real. This level is very atmospheric and doesn't just rely on exposition to tell the story which just adds much more to the experience. The only issue I found with the word discrete was mispelt. Appart from that this level had everything. Great dirrection, realistic graphics and even teaches french. Can't wait for part 2 Hopefully this fed back helps and if you wish to return the favour, https://lbpcentral.lbp-hub.com/index.php?t=90830-Kingdom-of-ice-olation. Any feedback will be appreciated

2014-08-21 21:39:00 Author: Jonarrthan Posts: 310

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With the school which approaches to big pat I am going to have a break on [ REC] Project because I would have no more too much time to play as much as during the holidays I too much hope not to disappoint world because of this choice but the school passes before the games Thank you to have taken time to try the introduction I am delighted whom it you are more and whom your comment be great well described it is going to allow me of improved the introduction so that it be completed

2014-08-22 01:56:00 Author: SackDream Posts: 29

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