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Hey everyone, I wrote this in 10 minutes for Puttatuit (sorry if I am spelling this wrong I have class in in 10 minutes) Xmas giveaway entry, enjoy! There was once was pony named Ben He was really best friends with a Hen They used to play in the den. They hide and go seek until ten There once was a hen named Julie Her eggs are a perfect ingredient for a smoothie Her dream is to ask out a cow named Drake And live together on a Farm that has a blue rake. There once was a cow named Drake He has the best milk - its not fake! He watches every day for a bird named Kell He moos to her because she owns him a new Bell! There was a bird named Kell Kell flew south away from the smell She flies in a pack, delievering fish to old Tom Cat And pretends that Drake never saw her by flying fast. There once was an old Tom Cat Boy how he hated introducing the characters, that's that! He wishes to jump, in a book made with fun He wants to be like Cat in the Hat! Oh Cat in the Hat does not exist All the animals but Tom knew that one twist They wish to say, that maybe one day Tom Cat would not wish to be him. Though they wondered on the brink of moonlight Why temper with a dream full of a imagination with desire? So they came up with a solution like no other. Like no other, indeed. They booted up LittleBigPlanet with a PS3 in the farmers house Oh how they never felt more alive like the show Back at the Barnyard with joust. They created with Sackboy a Cat in the Hat story like no other Replaced all of the characters with the animals in the Barn's shelter. They ran out of thermo and the night almost turned day. Tom the Old cat would see the thing way too early! They had to improvise, oh what would we do? It's not done said Drake the Cow, MOO MOO MOO! They found another PS3 right in the farmers room, luckly he was still asleep so they stole it ease. They agreed to make a part two, and told the hen do not scream cacoo cacoo! They used a handy dandy level link, and also quickly hearted each other even with no time to think. They added voice overs and a logo as well, my oh my this is looking swell! Everything rhymed and tom woke up, oh no wait a minute, our controllers died from energy! Oh the last minute and Tom was on his way. Kell came in and swooped him without a say MEOW MEOW cried tom in might Kell said tweet tweet, it will be alright. All the hens suddenly used there legs and broke out of their nesting places, they all when across the barn and ran inside man-powered energy cages. They ran so fast, faster than Ben could start this story again. The farmer woke up saw his Ps3 was gone, he call the cops saying this is wrong! The controllers were charged and the police came in, They farmer and the cops saw the animals near the thing. Out of no where with a luck of a draw, Henry the pig blew gas that knocked them off. The animals were used to the stench so they continued creating off to their extent. That topped everything of by putting a crown on top of Tom, They did not need the DLC, because the squirrel had one! Kell flew in and landed Tom in the den He saw the level made and wow he was glad. Dreams come true, and even animals in a barn have their own can we agree? And what better way is it to express our creativity. But oh no they forgot one special thing, the pony Ben was not a pony- no, not at all! It was Ben. With a pony tail. Who grew up with the barn and all in it. He knew the animals needed help, so he dreamed and got to it.

2013-11-18 17:14:00 Author: hyperdude95 Posts: 1793

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Congratulations! You won!

2013-11-24 21:35:00 Author: Jauw Posts: 484

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Congratulations! You won! 47333 Thank you! -hyper

2013-11-24 21:39:00 Author: hyperdude95 Posts: 1793

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I loved your story/poem! And in 10 minutes?! Very impressive! I'm ready to post my own story also! Not as happy/crazy as yours, but I enjoyed writing it!

2013-11-30 01:53:00 Author: Bryan_Zuckerberg Posts: 874

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