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[TearawayCompetitionEU] Valley Folds - Spotlighted!

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http://i1.lbp.me/img/bl/c31551fbee653e58fe8b933499ad68a8503330bb.png
http://lbp.me/v/qnq43xp

So here is my entry to the Tearaway level contest. It's quite short but I'm really proud of what I've created.
I took elements of gameplay from Tearaway and gave them a LBP twist.
Prizes are available in the level, so if you fancy yourself a ribbon winning, cutout, pig then this is the level for you!

Here are some pictures clearly meant to entice you to play the level.

http://i9.lbp.me/img/ft/dd9abbb91837416091d20faaed8004b72fa5f466.jpg
http://i5.lbp.me/img/ft/0b58e07b446d223603de17f2784adc8e48924175.jpg
http://i9.lbp.me/img/ft/339a75c0d33592d2ddd49676b63efcc10a815bf2.jpg
http://ia.lbp.me/img/ft/66aff64ed7d3e19a5a774df8040acd05929e4ca1.jpg
http://i4.lbp.me/img/ft/654c0f00b366fa971c88660d4ec405094ab58b31.jpg

There is a race mode if you use the sticker at the end on the level too!

Let me know what you think of my latest creation

-Jedi
http://lbp.me/v/qnq43xp
2013-09-11 11:35:00

Author:
Jedi_1993
Posts: 1518


looks neat! queued2013-09-11 12:33:00

Author:
biorogue
Posts: 8424


Interesting! Queued!

-hyper
2013-09-11 21:36:00

Author:
hyperdude95
Posts: 1793


GREAT LEVEL BRAVO!!!! loved it.

You should lead with that paper cut out stuff more often within this level. Seeing the cut oout pig was awesome. Also, great baddies idea with the bounces and the creatinator was clever!!!
2013-09-12 03:38:00

Author:
L-I-M-I
Posts: 611


GREAT LEVEL BRAVO!!!! loved it.

You should lead with that paper cut out stuff more often within this level. Seeing the cut oout pig was awesome. Also, great baddies idea with the bounces and the creatinator was clever!!!

Thanks! Some people got out of the level so that's fixed, move the blade for cutting the pig out to the right and increased the time for the race mode (I tried it and had 0.5 seconds left, thought I should add more time!)

Great idea for the intro, I'll see if I can work it in.
Edit: Tried the intro but it didn't look nearly as good as you'd think. I'm leaving it as is.

Thanks for the feedback!
2013-09-12 10:19:00

Author:
Jedi_1993
Posts: 1518


I love this level, my review of it wouldn't give it justice,I highly recommend giving it a play through,This level has a lot of personality and creativity which is a factor which I find is absent from Team picked levels these days, This is a diamond among gems. Keep up the good work2013-09-13 16:35:00

Author:
Jonarrthan
Posts: 310


Well, the contest entry time is over, so now it is a waiting game.

I may as well talk about the changes I made through creating.
The part with the pig was very different. The pig was done from memory and looked awful, it came out of a terrible looking barn and ended up in a pit of flames. To add to this there was a walking on the ceiling part but I took it out because I couldn't make it look like glue and the play tester (my younger sister) found it confusing.
The boss was going to be harder too. Platforms would disappear after each 'round' and you'd attack with the creatinator. The platforms made it too tricky and this attacking method made it hard to tell when it is vulnerable.
Also I was going to have it wake up again if you are noisy and the whole thing would start again but I thought that may be a bit mean.

If someone desperately wants one of the prizes from the level but can't due to my use of DLC, let me know and I'll do my best to remove it.
2013-09-15 07:16:00

Author:
Jedi_1993
Posts: 1518


Queued 2013-09-15 10:49:00

Author:
moleynator
Posts: 2914


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