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You work for a corrupt company that is speedily falling downhill. On a normal workday, something very abmormal happens: your co-worker is murdered. Your job now is to solve this Murder Mystery. Explore a detailed 4 story building for clues to finally accuse the person you think is the murderer. feedback would be greatly appreciated! http://lbp.me/v/qn8699v http://lbp.me/v/qn8699v UPDATE: The elevator has simple controls now! I have also tried to make the level clearer so people won't be confused!

2013-08-15 16:02:00 Author: YUBOY3 Posts: 116

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haha now i wana find out the mystery queued

2013-08-15 16:56:00 Author: Unknown User

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Since no one has completed this level, I will be sure to be more explanatory in the level. But please give me feeback to know what I need to do. Thanks.

2013-08-15 18:44:00 Author: YUBOY3 Posts: 116

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I have yet to play this, but I'll give you my feedback on this mysterious and exciting level of your; Consider it Queued!!!

2013-08-15 19:32:00 Author: Bryan_Zuckerberg Posts: 874

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Ita in my queued

2013-08-15 20:01:00 Author: Sandro8708 Posts: 625

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I was unable to finish the level, unfortunately. Anyways, I thought that the introduction was nice, but the rest of the level felt difficult to finish withot much guidance. Anyways, here are my Yays and Nays! Yays -The introduction you gave was very well done -The sound affects you added outside gave the level more depth -The furniture and hand-made decorations around your level gave it the mood of a corporate building Nays -There was a need for better direction as to what to do when you're stuck -No music in the level made it boring -The elevator logic was glitchy at times -A greater story would have made this better even without further improvements Score 6/10 I truly feel that this has so much more potential btu only if you are able to exploit it! Give your level a makeover that changes it from a random house level to an amazing cinematic masterpiece! add the proper music for the different scenes and provide a refined story that gives you suspense, joy, and wonder! I would start with the elevator first because that's how you get around and progress to adding logic for hints and such! once you have the rudimentary basics down for smooth playthrough go on to making the story juicier! I'd play it again if you improved upon it, but my score will strand firm until then!

2013-08-15 20:39:00 Author: Bryan_Zuckerberg Posts: 874

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Thank you for your feedback. I now notice all the flaws in my level. Thank you. I am changing thia level into a beta, for it is still under production. I will try to improve upon in all of the cons you mentioned. I would please still like feed back from others about who they accused and how to make the story clearer. EDIT: I updated the level to have more information about what to do and to make the level story hopefully clearer. THE ELEVATOR NOW HAS SIMPLE, EASY TO USE CONTROLS!!! there will be more updates to come!

2013-08-16 16:34:00 Author: YUBOY3 Posts: 116

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sounds intriguing, queued.

2013-08-17 07:15:00 Author: biorogue Posts: 8424

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I forgot to add that the music now plays during the level! Now this level has some more cutscenes to hopefully make your playthrough better. One of those cutscenes are now a murder flashback (see how the murder happened)! Also, to open the door in the basement it only requires you to find 3 clues (30 points)! Now you can replay the level to choose a different person if you choose the wrong person.

2013-08-19 15:10:00 Author: YUBOY3 Posts: 116

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