Archive: 7 posts

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Hey guys, I just uploaded my first level O.o I hope you wont mind to take a look at it and give me some nice feedback and tips :3 im still a newbie to creating levels and I appreciate every little bit of help. My level is called GrassGrass [platformer]. here it is: http://vita.lbp.me/v/df9ss

2013-07-27 18:47:00 Author: woulieka Posts: 45

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Queued, will leave a review shortly..

2013-07-27 19:03:00 Author: Kyesty Posts: 97

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Queued, Go check mine out too... http://vita.lbp.me/v/ddqfw Hope you like it!

2013-07-27 20:52:00 Author: Unknown User

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thanks u both, and lrateke I will!

2013-07-27 20:55:00 Author: woulieka Posts: 45

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So I played this earlier and I have to say it has a lot of potential. Some of the visuals (especially on those trees in the early section) are brilliant and the layering is great. However there are a few things to improve (obviously since this is your first you need to learn a couple more things). Whereas the trees have good layering, sometimes you lost that and would have a fairly flat, 3 layer section. Also most people don't like to see the bottom of the level (like the default floor) so maybe you could build a bit further off the floor to begin with Otherwise, I did very much enjoy it and as I said - lots of potential here

2013-07-30 13:14:00 Author: Coxy224 Posts: 2645

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I have to agree on the visuals for this level. You did great work on the design for the trees but the rest of the level seemed to tilt between empty and patches of clutter. Maby e space out the detail some more and add to the background to make the level more consistent. I also think it could use some more sound effects for things that happen. An example I'm thinking of is when you pull the switch and stuff drops down. I don't recall any sound indicator to go along with it. This also goes for all the platform and tree movements that ocurr. Even with the music, this seemed really quiet. Finally, gameplaywise, there was some good starts, but it didn't feel like there was too much danger or challenge associated with them. For the most part it was jumping or walking from place to place. Some parts did better though. A good start here.

2013-07-30 19:50:00 Author: xxMATEOSxx Posts: 1787

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Just had a go on this, I thought it was of a good length, good fun making my way through the level. Very good for a first platformer, well done.

2013-08-01 15:08:00 Author: LieutenantFatman Posts: 465

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