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(LBPC11) THE AMAZING CAVERN RESCUE OF CHRIS ALICE



It's finally here! My LBPC11 entry is now published and ready to be played.

http://lbp.me/v/mr6xg4/topreviews

http://i4.lbp.me/img/ft/f242bf59af0c076b404aaf7f67818984b62226eb.jpg

http://id.lbp.me/img/ft/7dd86c3d3eba7ed1d786fa921464d7e3a65ed9db.jpg

http://i7.lbp.me/img/ft/c07a311f432a4031ccec305859debb2a4e6d2973.jpg

http://i7.lbp.me/img/ft/4d748999be7fbc35c5e3b679e437c77fa1023f12.jpg

Description
You and a lost sack traveller find yourselves deep underground and no way out alone. Can you escape with the help of each other?

Control's
Triangle - Get Chris to follow you
Square - Chris will jump on a button for you
Circle - Chris will stand in a red zone.

Important
If Chris does not respond call him nearer using triangle.
If you or Chris die please replay.

Please give me feedback so I know what I can improve on before the deadline for the contest. Make sure you have subtitles turned on!
http://lbp.me/v/mr6xg4
2013-07-23 12:37:00

Author:
TAYLORJ1
Posts: 16


Ood luck its in my queued2013-07-23 14:44:00

Author:
Sandro8708
Posts: 625


Qued it up, will have a go soon 2013-07-23 20:45:00

Author:
Townzee
Posts: 157


Hi Taylor, I played your level earlier I liked it. Though so parts were a bit confusing. You might want to go into a bit if more detail on the controls. The detail was pretty good. Gameplay was nice. The stars bothored me, dunno why, lol. Not the best level, could use a bit of tweaking. The voice acting was nice as well. Well, good luck.
Still time to improve before the deadline.
2013-07-25 07:03:00

Author:
DawnBreaker_23
Posts: 568


Thank's DawnBreaker_23, I will keep improving it until the deadline.

EDIT:

Now got pictures!
2013-07-25 10:13:00

Author:
TAYLORJ1
Posts: 16


Nice. It's in my list now2013-07-25 19:40:00

Author:
porkyfern
Posts: 48


Very nice level, the AI is following some simple orders, but this is something quite confusing to know what to do. For example, it took me a certain time to get the companion enter in the elevator, because he would not follow me in there for no reason at all (after all, we all crave for awkwards rides in elevators with relative strangers, no?).

Also, all seems very compacted, you could have used more space to fit all these puzzles. I had the feeling to walk in new puzzle every two steps, which made the distinction between two puzzles not... distinct.

And as Dawnbreaker said it, the stars are... I would not say annoying, but they don't fit well in the level. Too shiny.
This is a good entry overall, not a winner (yet), but a top-hand at sure!
2013-07-26 19:01:00

Author:
Djibees
Posts: 189


Thank's for the detailed review djibees. I understand now about the star's not fitting the level, I'll leave them their for this contest but it the future i'll find something more suitable for the level2013-07-27 11:40:00

Author:
TAYLORJ1
Posts: 16


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