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First platformer from newbie

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This is on vita.I know it's raw but it is my first attempt at a plat former (Be gentle I've only been on the planet a couple of months.) I have a lot of great ideas but don't know the logic well enough to execute them. With some help from online tutorials I made what I think is a fun level, and imho it is better than recycled sharks and a few sponges floating on water, which remarkably seem too trend.
http://lbp.me/v/d1dke
2013-07-19 16:54:00

Author:
smartysloan
Posts: 73


Ehm. Sry this is the LBP2 showcase forum. post this on the psvita level showcase forum.2013-07-19 17:23:00

Author:
Sandro8708
Posts: 625


Moved to [LBPV] Level and Object Showcase.2013-07-19 17:26:00

Author:
Lady_Luck__777
Posts: 3458


Looks fun! I'm gonna give this one a try

edit: I've tried it, and here's my sorta review XD:

So to start off I really liked it, it was pretty good especially for your first one. nothing really that fancy but it was fun and entertaining.

IMO you could maybe improve/expand on the story a bit, like with more stuff about the story happening halfway the level or so.

I did have some issues with some score bubbles though. like when sliding down right before the popcorn part, I couldnt get all the bubbles I had to jump to get some. I couldnt really get all bubbles and I personally like being able to get all bubbles in a level. and the candy conveyor was a bit annoying at some times but not that bad. I did got some massive lag issues at certain places especially the start of the candy conveyor.

Another tip is that you could maybe improve the visuals of your level a bit, maybe with more complex shapes by using the corner editing tool. And maybe use some more stickers/decorations.

What I really liked is the bridge/hill thingy that gets made out of those blocks, the starburst stairs! that was it :3

and well uhm, I can't really think of something else. keep creating awesome stuff!
2013-07-19 22:57:00

Author:
woulieka
Posts: 45


oops sorry, obviously I am new to lbp central as well thanks

EDIT:

thanks for your time I will tweak it with all things considered.
2013-07-20 14:53:00

Author:
smartysloan
Posts: 73


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