Archive: 9 posts

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http://lbp.me/v/mhdh3b

2013-07-13 04:50:00 Author: Caliboy4599 Posts: 67

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Gameplay was very simple but i really liked the character and the atmosphere. The dialog was excruciatingly slow! Even for someone like me who struggles a little with english. Other than that it was a very enjoyable and relaxing experience, good work.

2013-07-13 06:01:00 Author: actio1_618 Posts: 81

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Its queued. The name sounds good

2013-07-13 07:46:00 Author: Sandro8708 Posts: 625

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Nice visuals and a kind main character. The level is too short to tell a story: after entering when the fox introduced me into the story I thought: "Oh great, a story platformer. And look how beautiful the design is." One minute later I reach the scoreboard and the fox say: "Thank you". ......Ewwww, for what? Nice level which could be a great level, if it would be longer

2013-07-14 11:50:00 Author: avundcv Posts: 2526

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wow. how about put a little more effort into advertising your level. all you did was post a link and you expect people to just jump up and play your level. You have to "sell" your level to the reader, entice them to play it. Add pictures, add a brief description, add some. thing.

2013-07-14 23:15:00 Author: biorogue Posts: 8424

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This is my first advertisement on here so i really don't know how to do much

2013-07-15 03:42:00 Author: Caliboy4599 Posts: 67

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Hi Caliboy, every beginning is hard and I remember my first time to showcase a level and if I wouldn't have some help from some friends then... I only can recommend you to busy yourself with that point because this has a lot of influence on how your levels will be noticed and how many gamers will play it and give reviews! A first start could be to read following hints in this thread: https://lbpcentral.lbp-hub.com/index.php?t=73343-LBPC-Showcase-Essential-Guide-%28For-Dummies%29 And also have a look on other showcased levels, this could be a good orientation! If you have questions then feel free to ask!^^ And now I've queued your level and I will give you a feedback when I#ve played it!^^ Many greetings, Jürgen^^ P.S. Using the edit-function you can do additional changes in your thread!^^

2013-07-15 08:11:00 Author: CuriousSack Posts: 3981

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I've got very few problems how a level is presented to me; in the end what matters is content although I do enjoy a small backstory to it all or one image or two! Anyways, I already had this puppy queued up and I will make sure to provide my feedback once I play it!

2013-07-15 19:14:00 Author: Bryan_Zuckerberg Posts: 874

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Hi Caliboy, you've created a nice level, I love the atmosphere!^^ The story should be more elaborated, it's like chocolate that someone holds before your nose and you're not allowed to taste it!^^ I would be rather curious to know why and what!^^ And another point: I would have wished to have more checkpoints! (But maybe because I'm old and a little bit awkward!) Many greetings, Jürgen^^

2013-07-17 14:55:00 Author: CuriousSack Posts: 3981

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