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Ramadan Karem! {Platformer}

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Hello my awesome fellas! It's been so long i... Don't sign in lbpc I was busy, *ahem* I present you... My level!! Ramd'an karem guys and girls.



http://lbp.me/v/mfkf0e
http://lbp.me/v/mfkf0e
2013-07-09 23:44:00

Author:
KING_HACK_GREEN
Posts: 41


got it in the queue2013-07-10 02:34:00

Author:
biorogue
Posts: 8424


It looks good! Add it to the queued2013-07-10 11:08:00

Author:
Sandro8708
Posts: 625


Ramd'an karem too King gona play today!2013-07-10 13:06:00

Author:
Five-Ate-Five
Posts: 197


Hey, cool level - I liked your use of colour (although my eyes did start to sting a bit towards the end.... I blame that on my old age lol)

A couple of points though:

1. I recommend you get more picky about your camera angles, and hone your camera transitions. There are times when the camera shifts so quickly that if you're caught mid-momentum, it really screws with you. Now this isn't always a bad thing, sometimes it can really amp up the difficulty, but also bear in mind that if every camera angle is really obtuse or really far away, they quickly lose their effect.

2. I like the way you used the same lantern so many times for different functions, although you could maybe make it a bit clearer when the function changes. I gather when they change colour they change function, electrified and say, purple one minute, then grabbable and green the next, but it took me some trial and error to figure that out. That would be fine if there was consistency, like if all lanterns killed me, I'd learn that the first time. But then when I come across a barrier that can only be passed by grabbing a lantern, I'm going to be understandably suspicious of said lantern from my previous experience of it killing me. So perhaps have a very quick legend at the beginning of the level? or even a clue in some other form, like a sackbot grabbing a green lantern in the background or... I dunno, whatever takes your fancy. It's all about conveyance I guess is what I'm getting it. (channelling egoraptor right now!

Just my two cents, you can take it or leave it, I don't mind

Nice stuff though! Look forward to seeing more levels
2013-07-10 21:25:00

Author:
rialrees
Posts: 1015


Yay, very nice level!

As rialrees said before, some of the camera angles could be changed, but that didn't disturbed me

I like the solid platforming gameplay and the colourful environment.
I had a lot of fun playing it.

Great level
2013-07-10 22:36:00

Author:
avundcv
Posts: 2526


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