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My First Music Gallery

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http://littlesigplanet.com/v/mdszts/wallpapers_gridpaper/mini/sig.png (http://lbp.me/v/mdszts)

This is my first music gallery, and includes the only four songs I've ever made. Each has it's only little scene to help fit the mood. They are kinda short so the will probably be really repetitive. Feedback is very much appreciated and I would like to know of I should continue making music and what not. Also if anyone wants the songs I will update the level and give them out.
http://lbp.me/v/mdszts
2013-07-08 20:55:00

Author:
SilverTriforce7
Posts: 183


got it in the queue2013-07-08 21:08:00

Author:
biorogue
Posts: 8424


I will have a listen to them when i get myself online ^^2013-07-08 21:14:00

Author:
Townzee
Posts: 157


New music creators are good 2013-07-08 21:31:00

Author:
Sandro8708
Posts: 625


Hi SilverTriforce7,

its always exciting to listen to the music of other composers! So I'm looking forward to play your gallery level when I'm online again!^^

Many greetings, Jürgen^^
2013-07-09 14:19:00

Author:
CuriousSack
Posts: 3981


Cool, added to the queue!2013-07-09 16:45:00

Author:
dolphins-r-lame
Posts: 281


Queued!2013-07-10 00:21:00

Author:
actio1_618
Posts: 81


Good music! I wish I could make music :o2013-07-10 19:01:00

Author:
dolphins-r-lame
Posts: 281


Hi SilverTriforce7,

I like your music, four really fine tunes, and what a fantastic idea to build these little scenes for each track!^^ So you got my yay and heart and I'm hoping that soon you will publish more of your compositions! Thank you for a good entertainment and many greetings from Bavaria, Jürgen^^
2013-07-10 19:15:00

Author:
CuriousSack
Posts: 3981


the music is great, don't stop making it! The scenery...not so much. I think I'm just not very fond of the MGS grid, plus it didn't seem to fit in. Anyway, like I said, the music is very good.2013-07-10 19:53:00

Author:
biorogue
Posts: 8424


Hi there, sorry I didn't leave a review in game - darned review bug - looking forward to the fix in the patch!

anyway. Took a gander at your music hub tonight - really nice idea to have a little visual scene for each song, but as bio said, the mgs grid in between is a bit... random. Perhaps keep the camera view in a bit close too as it really does feel very set-like and not at all scenery like when you can see the edges of the room!

My favourite music was the jungle piece. I liked the vibe of that one!

Keep at it, I hope to see many more music hubs and levels from you
2013-07-10 20:52:00

Author:
rialrees
Posts: 1015


You created some nice music tracks. Good job on that

I also like the different sceneries for the songs, but I have to agree with rialrees and biorogue.
Maybe you could create a kind of tunnel which connects the different scenes or use a teleport.
For the atmosphere of a level it's always good if you can't see the edge, or let's say the border of the environment.
Anyway: good level
2013-07-10 22:42:00

Author:
avundcv
Posts: 2526


Hi SilverTriforce7,

I like your music, four really fine tunes, and what a fantastic idea to build these little scenes for each track!^^ So you got my yay and heart and I'm hoping that soon you will publish more of your compositions! Thank you for a good entertainment and many greetings from Bavaria, Jürgen^^
Thanks. It probably won't be a while for some new music , because those are the only songs I've made. You are actually the first person to give me feedback so I hadn't made more. But I will now!


the music is great, don't stop making it! The scenery...not so much. I think I'm just not very fond of the MGS grid, plus it didn't seem to fit in. Anyway, like I said, the music is very good.
I was actually planning on quitting my music Little Big Music Career, but I will definitely keep going now...yeah the MGS was random. I've been trying to get everything worth while off my old profile, and I was rushing to finish the level.


Hi there, sorry I didn't leave a review in game - darned review bug - looking forward to the fix in the patch!

anyway. Took a gander at your music hub tonight - really nice idea to have a little visual scene for each song, but as bio said, the mgs grid in between is a bit... random. Perhaps keep the camera view in a bit close too as it really does feel very set-like and not at all scenery like when you can see the edges of the room!

My favourite music was the jungle piece. I liked the vibe of that one!

Keep at it, I hope to see many more music hubs and levels from you
Awesome, glad you like the jungle. It was actually the first song I made...Like I said above about the MGS grid, I didn't know how to connect them and stuff...but the point was to actually make it like a set. But I'll try adjusting the view.


You created some nice music tracks. Good job on that

I also like the different sceneries for the songs, but I have to agree with rialrees and biorogue.
Maybe you could create a kind of tunnel which connects the different scenes or use a teleport.
For the atmosphere of a level it's always good if you can't see the edge, or let's say the border of the environment.
Anyway: good level
Thanks for the feedback. Not much to much to say about my MGS decision that I haven't already. I totally didn't think it though haha. But I'll keep in mind all of this for my next music gallery.
2013-07-11 03:25:00

Author:
SilverTriforce7
Posts: 183


Queued. I'll be back with my F4F 2013-07-14 02:11:00

Author:
Radio447
Posts: 159


Queued

let me know what you think of my Level Shape Shooter
2013-07-16 20:34:00

Author:
RedSoakedSponge
Posts: 52


Thanks. It probably won't be a while for some new music , because those are the only songs I've made. You are actually the first person to give me feedback so I hadn't made more. But I will now!


I'm glad that you will go on composing, otherwise it would have been a loss!^^ When creating a new level then ask some friends for beta-testing, this is the best way to explore, how the levels will be perceived by other gamers, and you can get valuable hints for improvements!^^
I wish you a lot of fun with composing and creating, many greetings from Bavaria, Jürgen^^
2013-07-17 11:06:00

Author:
CuriousSack
Posts: 3981


nice music but i think the music could use a little more depth.

the visual design has some nice touches with the individual scenes for each song but im not sure about the VR material inbetween the scenes. seems a bit out of place.

hope my feedback is useful
2013-07-17 13:07:00

Author:
RedSoakedSponge
Posts: 52


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