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Acoustics ( Platformer)

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Hi, Everyone. I need some feedback on a level that I've created. It took me more than a month to put this level together and I would really appreciate some plays/comments on it. Cheers.

http://vita.lbp.me/v/dzje3

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2013-07-06 12:27:00

Author:
Unknown User


looks cool, got it queued2013-07-06 15:33:00

Author:
biorogue
Posts: 8424


Welcome to LBPC! Going to play your level today.

BTW, don't forget to post your level link next time!

Link to "Acoustics ( Platformer)": http://vita.lbp.me/v/dzje3
2013-07-06 16:46:00

Author:
Schark94
Posts: 3378


hotsim- when you edited your original post the auto moderation system caught it.

Links were removed to make your post visible.
The auto moderation system catches posts with a large amount of links by members with 5 posts or less.

Here are the pics you posted:

http://i39.tinypic.com/f0vqlx.jpg

http://i39.tinypic.com/2i0gknr.jpg

http://i44.tinypic.com/t8m8if.jpg

http://i43.tinypic.com/awds2u.jpg
2013-07-06 19:05:00

Author:
Lady_Luck__777
Posts: 3458


Played this today, and it looks good. Unfortunately, I never finished it. You really need to add some more checkpoints. This game takes too long to load and having to restart a level is never very fun.

If you take my advice, I will gladly play this again.
2013-07-07 19:37:00

Author:
VelcroJonze
Posts: 1305


thanx for the feedback. Can you please tell me which areas would you like me to add it to?

Also thnx to all those who played my level, it really means a lot.

edit : new checkpoints added!
2013-07-07 19:47:00

Author:
Unknown User


The very first obstacle. Add a checkpoint before the bounce pads that are between the crushers. An infinite life checkpoint.

One of my rules when creating is to take care of the player. And I always add a checkpoint before every obstacle. Frustrated players normally don't heart levels.

I would also add a sticker indicating touch on the drawers at the beginning of the level. My first play through it took a minute to realize they were touch activated.
2013-07-07 20:32:00

Author:
VelcroJonze
Posts: 1305


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