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Smog City

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Smog City
http://lbp.me/v/m9971k
http://lbp.me/v/m9971k

Well hello again sackthings! DRL here with a brand spanking new level for you! This is a warm hearted platformer addressing the issues of pollution and environmental problems! This was originally a level for littlebignetworks AOG contest but i didn't have enough time to finish it and the level was just to big! I had a blast making this so i hope you like it Music is by: Chessguy, Idgowans and breezy-the-pro, Go give them some thanks!

Here are some fantastic pictures of this fantastic level xD

http://ib.lbp.me/img/ft/79b415a76ee7e9c1cbe25e06978ce07d2d059f57.jpg

http://ie.lbp.me/img/ft/cceaafe5f5924704b4f4a4352aef16b33fc42444.jpg

http://id.lbp.me/img/ft/52de7a4bbb5b3ba95a54466a839e813b256205bd.jpg

http://i8.lbp.me/img/ft/228e709dfddb617fb33c8c7b0bd5040193314088.jpg

Have fun! Oh and this level is 1p only!
http://lbp.me/v/m9971k
2013-06-29 19:48:00

Author:
dolphins-r-lame
Posts: 281


this looks great! got it queued2013-06-29 20:45:00

Author:
biorogue
Posts: 8424


Thanks! Enjoy 2013-06-29 21:17:00

Author:
dolphins-r-lame
Posts: 281


Add it to the queued!2013-06-29 22:32:00

Author:
Sandro8708
Posts: 625


Thanks, hope you like it! Dont forget to tell me what you think!2013-06-29 23:19:00

Author:
dolphins-r-lame
Posts: 281


Looks great! Queued- I'm definately going to play this next time on.2013-06-30 02:31:00

Author:
Radio447
Posts: 159


Thanks! Let me know how you like it 2013-06-30 17:59:00

Author:
dolphins-r-lame
Posts: 281


Sounds good, I'll play when I have the LBP2, I wanted to put some levels of AOG in the queue but I forgot, so this will be a good start.2013-06-30 18:36:00

Author:
TYeeN
Posts: 26


Awesome! Id love to hear what you think :32013-06-30 21:15:00

Author:
dolphins-r-lame
Posts: 281


The game play was fun. Very easy actually. I was actually going through wondering when something was going to explode in my face and I'd die 500 times but it never came. The material choices made an effective contrast the gray cardboard VS. the bright green at the end, and I liked having that little epilogue. It gave closure to it all. A fun story with a good message.2013-07-01 14:15:00

Author:
Kato
Posts: 732


Im glad you liked it! Thanks for the feedback ive hardly gotten any at all 2013-07-01 17:29:00

Author:
dolphins-r-lame
Posts: 281


It seems really cool with a nice environment, queued.2013-07-01 18:16:00

Author:
Tskm7
Posts: 27


(F4F, mind checking out my Magician's Platformer level? Click the picture in my Signature for a nice redirection to the lbp.me page)

This level was very creative. The characters were quite funny, and the platforming aspect was enjoyable. I like the message behind it, about saving water and what-not; definately a good level if LBP were to do a 'Save-The-Enviroment' type thing. I loved the feel of the city itself, with the bits and bobs serving as make-shift platforms, and the buildings following a simple design. All-in-all, a great level. Definately got a Yay from me.
2013-07-01 19:48:00

Author:
Radio447
Posts: 159


Thanks! Ill be sure to check out your lvl asap!2013-07-02 06:41:00

Author:
dolphins-r-lame
Posts: 281


I had a lot of fun on this, and enjoyed some of the touches of humor along with its environmental message. Nice and clean design with a few shaky camera bits too (you can't go wrong with shaky camera it brings it to life ect) The platforming was simple with some nice details and it had a nice pace to it.

I did think the grab 3 soda cans section could have been a bit closer to the big bin, to make it a bit tighter in design but overall it was still fun. Did you use 2 level links? The sewer section wasn't very large, i would have thought it would fit easy inside the first part of the level no?

I can see you had fun creating it and im glad you did, because i enjoyed it very much
2013-07-02 10:29:00

Author:
RtooDee2
Posts: 175


Im glad you enjoyed the level and yes... I used teo level link! The first part of thr level was completly full then the sewers was about half way full then the cut scene was about 3/4 full so i was in a bit of a prediciment lol i had to do level link or emit/destroy. I wasnt quite prepared to do that im going to look into that technique for my next level 2013-07-02 16:09:00

Author:
dolphins-r-lame
Posts: 281


Yay. That was fun

Like the enjoyable gameplay and the nice characteres you created.

Very good level
2013-07-07 19:48:00

Author:
avundcv
Posts: 2526


Yay. That was fun

Like the enjoyable gameplay and the nice characteres you created.

Very good level

Yay glad you enjoyed!
2013-07-08 04:15:00

Author:
dolphins-r-lame
Posts: 281


Queued it, looking forward to playing this later.

Summary:
Well this level wasn't exactly what I was expecting, but in a good way! It had simple but fun platforming,mI didn't have any trouble geeting through the level. And it has a great meaniful story too.

Graphics: 5/5

I can't say the artwork was over the top(it was still great thoough), but they definitely did the job they were supposed to. The theme was well represented throughout the level. And how you even had custom characters, that weren't sackbots, now that was just amazing! I loved the caterpillar

Gameplay: 3/5

The game play was fun. Just jumping and swing around a way over polluted city. There wasn't any ground breaking experience in the platforming, but it wasn't needed. It was pretty much some classic LBP game play.

Story/Objective: 5/5

Well umm how do I put this...it was awesome! I don't think I've ever actually played that had a story other than to entertain. It had a great message, and it makes me wish there was more I could do to help the environment.

Overall: 4.3/5

This is actually one of the best levels I've played in a while. It was great although, not exactly the most thrilling level. Although maybe that's just me, cause I was hoping for a boss fight with some kind of chemical waste monster. I want a sequel though. One that takes place in the non polluted city. I think that would be cool.
2013-07-08 20:48:00

Author:
SilverTriforce7
Posts: 183


Have put it in my que, looks gd. Sorry to hear you didnt finish in time. But you can not rush a good level2013-07-08 21:24:00

Author:
Townzee
Posts: 157


Hey man i played it a few days ago, but I've been really busy in the game as in real life, so I had completely forgotten the name of the level in the forum, sometimes I get a little tiring to type much with the ps3 control, yeah, I don't have keyboard, so many times that i avoid the feedback there when is possible...

- I liked the issue directly, the background, and the sequence, although the music was a bit repetitive it was not bad, but I have to say that constantly i listen a sudden change in her, perhaps it was when it restarted, but honestly this point affected my experience, the gameplay is normal, personally visuals too, (maybe it's because I'm not used to the type of material used, or is not much quite to my liking, but overall I think we are good for the subject) I liked what you did with the 3d material on the background, also how you used the needles as lethal device, I liked certain ideas but not others, also felt that the characters made ​​them lack that slight twist that few have. In general is a good level with a nice topic, although I really would have liked to see a little more...

:star::star::star:

Can improved, with more dynamics, more interaction and small details that seem to go unnoticed.
2013-07-08 23:25:00

Author:
TYeeN
Posts: 26


Thank you all for the amazing feedback! I new if i waited long enough i would get some! Whether you liked or disliked the level telling me helps me improve as a creator

-thanks!
2013-07-10 05:09:00

Author:
dolphins-r-lame
Posts: 281


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