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Dream World: Dream Castle Of Zenan

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Dream Castle Of Zenan is the first entery to my Dream World Series. You must find Zeno The Dark and seal him way once and for all. Your mission is to save not just the dream world but your world aswel. Key features Include: Spectacular music all done by BUDDYDESTRUCTION with amazing visuals and a rich story.
http://lbp.me/v/k1tv5k

Heres the link to LBP.me incase the link thingie is still broken
http://lbp.me/v/k1tv5k
2013-06-17 06:23:00

Author:
Thug_Life_EQ
Posts: 181


I have it queued up.2013-06-17 13:44:00

Author:
Kato
Posts: 732


in the queue it is2013-06-17 19:10:00

Author:
biorogue
Posts: 8424


Cool PSN thug life its in the queued2013-06-17 22:36:00

Author:
Sandro8708
Posts: 625


Looks good. Queued. 2013-06-18 04:05:00

Author:
DawnBreaker_23
Posts: 568


Your 3D designe us beautiful 2013-06-18 18:54:00

Author:
Sandro8708
Posts: 625


Nice story and great design.
I am looking forward to the next parts
2013-06-18 20:55:00

Author:
avundcv
Posts: 2526


I really like the otherworldly feel to the environment. The floating glass blocks was really neat! I actually am interested in what happens next!2013-06-19 03:09:00

Author:
Kato
Posts: 732


queued it up, bout to go play!

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So, All of this is CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICISM and not to be taken negatively:

The good:
-REALLY cool background (the rainbow-ness, the glass(?) cubes floating around. Just stellar and cool
-good use of the 3D tool
-It's a series! I love series, just one level is never enough
-Good use of sackbots

The bad:
-mostly visual rather than play oriented gameplay (which is fine if that is what you were going for)
-slightly bland playing area (the area sackboy can be in)
-very simple forms (once again, fine if thats what you want)
-sackbots in red kept "flinching"

My opinion and advice:
If you work out the kinks, and add some gameplay element to the upcoming level for the series it could be really good!

Try making rooms shapes that are various and made up from different layers (not just 3 layer thick rectangles)

Rather than having the sackbots ACT to do there actions, put logic on a controlinator that you have placed in their circutboards (yes, you can do that). When a controlinator is on a sackbots circutboard you have imput things into the buttons of that controlinator (including look up, look down, hold hands to the side, hold hands up, jump, everything)

Well, thats all ive got to say. Good luck with your level and the upcoming sequel!
2013-06-27 13:05:00

Author:
septamus112
Posts: 82


Thanks for the info. In the upcoming levels there will be more play oriented gameplay. The Castle Of Zenan was more of an opening in my opinion. lol With the sackbot logic i NOT as good, i'm still experimenting with types of advance logic. Tgat why i'm taking a break from working my Neo 17 retro style type space shooter, because i'm don't know how to make a CPU system. I'm the the player ship and the menus are fully done but i've hit a snare with the CPU.2013-06-28 08:57:00

Author:
Thug_Life_EQ
Posts: 181


I've played it and I'm curious to the sequel aswell. Keep up the good work 2013-06-28 17:22:00

Author:
AlPhAoMeGa81
Posts: 73


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