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Cherokee

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http://vita.lbp.me/v/c95ne

Deep beneath the hollows of the Appalachian mountains, long before the resorts and casinos, there was a wooden paradise of platforming perfection to test ones skill and merit. The natives called in Cherokee.

Been working on this one for almost three months. Sorry if it seems short, but the thermo was getting hot.

Let me know if you have any problems.

I'll do f4f for anyone leaving a review.

Thanks!

-VJ

http://i2.api.vita.lbp.me/img/ft/dc2ff11f1959ce61a5ef678b44c754ff47a7d847.jpg

http://id.api.vita.lbp.me/img/ft/06dd9e81cd17cf333599cc73bae0f408f0b6a274.jpg

http://i0.api.vita.lbp.me/img/ft/35060a25e6e33fbd6b1bbeede9abbb48fc2d8f00.jpg		2013-05-03 02:53:00

Author:
VelcroJonze
Posts: 1305

OMG OMG OMG! At last! The Jeep platformer, err... Cherokee.
Queued!

Thanks VJ!		2013-05-03 03:37:00

Author:
Pulparindo15
Posts: 334

Sweeeeeeet, queue'd! :star:2013-05-03 06:00:00

Author:
nysudyrgh
Posts: 5482

Looks awesome, queued ! 2013-05-03 06:46:00

Author:
Gwaeron
Posts: 170

I just played your level, and here are my impressions (also written down in a review for your level):

"]This level reminds me of the levels in the first world of the story, and that's something good. It also has some kind of Mexican influence, I think. When you die in the 'scrolling tower', it can be really hard to go on further: it happened multiple times that I respawned directly under spikes, and I couldn't get away quickly enough (so I died again...).
Additional notes (I don't know if there's a limit on characters, so I decided to only put the most important stuff in the review):

Just after the race started, I jumped behind the spikes and fell down. I don't know how I did it, and it also wasn't possible for me to do it again, but maybe you could add some spikes behind there as well?

But, overall, thank you for this level! It was a fantastic experience, and I'm looking forward to your future levels!

And would you like to play my level and leave some feedback? You can find it on LBP.me (http://vita.lbp.me/v/c8j78) or take a look at the thread (https://lbpcentral.lbp-hub.com/index.php?t=79514-Sackville-s-hero) I've made.

Finally, does anyone know why happened has been changed into ******** in the review?

Things removed because it makes sense to me now:

As noted in the review, it's really hard in the 'scrolling tower (http://vita.lbp.me/p/9gjhp)' to stay alive once you've died. However, the time you have to change platforms after one of the spiky things has been removed is quite short. Maybe a sound signal to indicate which one is going to disappear is handy? That way, you can jump to another platform on time, making it easier to stay alive. In my opinion, right now, it's impossible to stay alive in this part of the level without knowing which spiky thingy is going to disappear. (I hope it makes sense what I'm saying right here. My knowledge of the English language is not great, so maybe I'm saying it really difficult)


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And it looks like Cherokee is already Team Picked! Congratulations!		2013-05-03 08:17:00

Author:
jpelgrom
Posts: 11

OMG, finally! Got this queued up!

BTW, this is the fastest Team Pick I've ever seen. Congrats bro!		2013-05-03 09:58:00

Author:
Schark94
Posts: 3378

This level is well constructed!
I love your design<3		2013-05-03 11:26:00

Author:
hphzq966
Posts: 76

Oh yeah, once again, VJ surprises us with another great platformer :star:
I liked everything! Short? Nope, The level have the exact size! Not long, not short.
It has some cool contraptions! and nice bubble combos! I was able to be in first place for a while!
http://farm9.staticflickr.com/8536/8704330895_bb8c5950e1_z.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/93211743@N07/8704330895/)
Then came Schark ... Lol (This means the Hi-Score War :kz

Well, Thanks for this! I had so much fun playing!

And by the way Congrats! http://i5.api.vita.lbp.me/img/fw/g125488-47595c87.pngTeam Picked!... Again! 		2013-05-03 18:22:00

Author:
Pulparindo15
Posts: 334

Okay, so I played this level and here are my thoughts:

The gameplay was very inventive, it has a lot of unique platforming mechanics. The scrolling tower at the end was a great idea. Together with the bubble combos it was a nice challenge for me. The difficulty in this level was balanced perfectly. It was increasing together with the player's progress. This level also has a medium length which makes it a perfect platformer.

The spikes placed all around gave it a dangerous feeling. One false step and you look like Swiss cheese. Also, good job on the stickering and camera settings.
Another platforming greatness from VelcroJonze. Excellent job! + http://i1163.photobucket.com/albums/q559/Schark6000/Other%20stuff/heart.png		2013-05-03 21:43:00

Author:
Schark94
Posts: 3378

Yay! I have been waiting for a new level from you. Cool, I will play it soon. And that's great, Team Picked! CONGRATS!2013-05-03 22:16:00

Author:
Kapum
Posts: 103

Ye highscore be smitten! :arg:

http://i43.tinypic.com/5jtdh4.png		2013-05-04 08:55:00

Author:
nysudyrgh
Posts: 5482

http://www.lbpcentral.com/forums/attachment.php?attachmentid=45371&d=1367657270

I am NO.1		2013-05-04 09:50:00

Author:
hphzq966
Posts: 76

Oh yeah? We'll see about that! :kz:

EDIT: Beaten! 55000 points. c:		2013-05-04 12:08:00

Author:
nysudyrgh
Posts: 5482

Watched the first screenshot
http://static.comicvine.com/uploads/original/11111/111111238/2967129-3013876001-Not-b.png

Interesting level ._. Queued		2013-05-04 14:44:00

Author:
doggy97
Posts: 964

I just played your level, and here are my impressions (also written down in a review for your level):

Additional notes (I don't know if there's a limit on characters, so I decided to only put the most important stuff in the review):

Just after the race started, I jumped behind the spikes and fell down. I don't know how I did it, and it also wasn't possible for me to do it again, but maybe you could add some spikes behind there as well?

But, overall, thank you for this level! It was a fantastic experience, and I'm looking forward to your future levels!

And would you like to play my level and leave some feedback? You can find it on LBP.me (http://vita.lbp.me/v/c8j78) or take a look at the thread (https://lbpcentral.lbp-hub.com/index.php?t=79514-Sackville-s-hero) I've made.

Finally, does anyone know why happened has been changed into ******** in the review?

Things removed because it makes sense to me now:

As noted in the review, it's really hard in the 'scrolling tower (http://vita.lbp.me/p/9gjhp)' to stay alive once you've died. However, the time you have to change platforms after one of the spiky things has been removed is quite short. Maybe a sound signal to indicate which one is going to disappear is handy? That way, you can jump to another platform on time, making it easier to stay alive. In my opinion, right now, it's impossible to stay alive in this part of the level without knowing which spiky thingy is going to disappear. (I hope it makes sense what I'm saying right here. My knowledge of the English language is not great, so maybe I'm saying it really difficult)


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And it looks like Cherokee is already Team Picked! Congratulations!

Thanks for the in depth review.

I appreciate your suggestions too. I fixed the part where you can fall out the level. Thanks so much for pointing that out to me.

That's what I love about the forums. Feedback is crucial to making these levels better.

I will gladly play your level and will leave you some feedback in your thread.


Okay, so I played this level and here are my thoughts:

The gameplay was very inventive, it has a lot of unique platforming mechanics. The scrolling tower at the end was a great idea. Together with the bubble combos it was a nice challenge for me. The difficulty in this level was balanced perfectly. It was increasing together with the player's progress. This level also has a medium length which makes it a perfect platformer.

The spikes placed all around gave it a dangerous feeling. One false step and you look like Swiss cheese. Also, good job on the stickering and camera settings.
Another platforming greatness from VelcroJonze. Excellent job! + http://i1163.photobucket.com/albums/q559/Schark6000/Other%20stuff/heart.png

Thanks for the review Schark. I am happy you like it. After you, Nys, and myself played in in multiplayer the other day, it gave a me chance to fix a few bug. Thanks!.		2013-05-05 17:50:00

Author:
VelcroJonze
Posts: 1305

Well? Have you all finished attending Platforming Class? Cause I'm itching to beat all yer scores again! :ninja:2013-05-05 21:15:00

Author:
nysudyrgh
Posts: 5482

Amazing platformer, hearted!!!2013-05-05 21:48:00

Author:
Kyesty
Posts: 97

After you, Nys, and myself played in in multiplayer the other day, it gave a me chance to fix a few bug. Thanks!.
Glad we helped! :3


Well? Have you all finished attending Platforming Class? Cause I'm itching to beat all yer scores again! :ninja:
How the heck did you get over 55000 points?! That's just impossible, even for me! xD		2013-05-06 16:28:00

Author:
Schark94
Posts: 3378

Glad we helped! :3


How the heck did you get over 55000 points?! That's just impossible, even for me! xD

Lol, I never got over 50,000 in all the times I play tested it. 55,000 must be possible though if Nys got it. :hero:

I guess if you hit all the bubble chains, and make a perfect run through the race segment.

I am impressed with the high scores on this.

I should have set that last achievement star to 50,000 instead of 40,000. 		2013-05-06 16:56:00

Author:
VelcroJonze
Posts: 1305

I guess if you hit all the bubble chains, and make a perfect run through the race segment.
Well I did this multiple times and aced the level, but my highest score was about 53000 points.

There must be some sneaky trick for this. >_>		2013-05-06 17:35:00

Author:
Schark94
Posts: 3378

After you, Nys, and myself played in in multiplayer the other day, it gave a me chance to fix a few bug. Thanks!.

Yeah, glad we could help with your switch thingie VJ! That's one of your own fave inventions I think, they keep popping up in your levels! xD


There must be some sneaky trick for this. >_>

Snake Style! :ninja:		2013-05-06 18:29:00

Author:
nysudyrgh
Posts: 5482

Okay, I have made a few updates over the last couple days. Mainly trying to keep people from falling out of the level. There were three ways Sackboy's were getting to the floor, but I think I have finally fixed those problems.

Hopefully no more updates are coming. I am kind of ready to leave this level alone.

I apologize to anyone who had this in their DL list, and had to update it.

I added a couple more stickers and one hard to get to prize bubble worth a few extra points.

If anyone finds anymore problems, please post in this thread or PM me.

Thanks for the plays, I do appreciate them. 		2013-05-12 21:21:00

Author:
VelcroJonze
Posts: 1305

Wohoho! Some Tendon guy got REALLY close to beating my score. :kz:
I'll be ready to smash it again. :ninja:		2013-05-13 17:14:00

Author:
nysudyrgh
Posts: 5482

Congrats on the Spotlight VJ!2013-05-13 18:45:00

Author:
Schark94
Posts: 3378

This looks great. Wish I could play these classic VJ levels again.2013-05-28 00:19:00

Author:
eagerneph
Posts: 1536


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