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this is my third published but it was actually the 1st I had started. check it out and let me know wat y'all think. I appreciate every bit of feedback UPDATE: here goes some pics of the littleART.MUSEUM http://img204.imageshack.us/img204/3788/aphoto5sd8.jpg Entrance to the LBP Art Museum http://img292.imageshack.us/img292/998/aphoto2mb6.jpg The Pollock Room http://img132.imageshack.us/img132/2748/aphoto1pr5.jpg The Sculpture Room http://img291.imageshack.us/img291/4579/aphoto4og6.jpg Last Room Come take a trip to the LBP Art Museum! Featuring some atmospheric platforming through multiple rooms themed after some little to well known artists. More rooms are in the process of being built and an update should be available late February. Come check out the level and be sure to leave feedback if you have any!

2009-01-24 06:20:00 Author: xThaVIOLENTonEx Posts: 26

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I gave your Art Museum level a try and thought it was pretty interesting. Pros: Coloring was spot-on. I loved the scenery around the museum too. The artwork was good too, though maybe you should throw in some classic (I suppose you would need a PS Eye to do so though). The platforming was pretty good. I actually got a little stuck in the first room until I figured out I needed to go behind the glass block. It had a cool, hectic, jumbled together feel which I think fits it. The text was appropriate and funny. Cons: Too short, but sounds like you're addressing this Couldn't find the ticket, which made me think at first I was going to be stuck. It didn't make sense that I could just go in without the ticket. It seems everyone else has had the same problem since I was #2 on the scoreboard (w/ around 2000 points). You had 4x points so I'm guessing you know some secret. The text was funny, but didn't seem to have a point. I get it now, the text said don't touch the painting and that's exactly what I needed to do; the text said stay away from the sculpture and I had to climb it! GREAT IDEA, but as I know from my own level, people don't often pay enough attention to the text. I look forward to seeing the rest of the level.

2009-01-24 23:34:00 Author: larryjoe701 Posts: 68

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Ok, here are my thoughts on the level: PROS: You have got a really atmospheric level there! like larryjoe said that jumbled together style really fits! The artworks look good and the beginning looks very good. Some good platforming elements. The text was really great and well thought out! Cons: You often overdo the jumbled together style with seemingly pointlessly placed holes and other weird things etc. I was also stuck in the beginning where the text says that i need a ticket to pass, in the beginning you don't really get that you are supposed to do the opposite to what the text says. It's a little to short. It doesn't look good when you can see the edge of the level, at least not when it is the standard beige cloth. Suggestions: in my opinion you should try to make it look cleaner and more like a museum outside the rooms too, you can often see thin strips of darkmatter, a lot of dissolve and theres often points which i have no idea of how to reach even when i really tried to reach them. Like stated above, it would be good if you made it longer. Make it more clear that you don't need to have a ticket in the beginning. Experiment a little with background to replace the ugly edges of the level in the beginning with the better looking stone walls etc on the backgrounds . Overall it's a good atmospheric and humorous level which deserves 4 stars! You can probably guess what level i want feedback on, the link is just below /

2009-01-25 09:42:00 Author: Marklin80 Posts: 458

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