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The space base

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You crash land on a strange planet where you discover a secret off world alien detention centre. Search inside for an Earth teleporter to get back safely home. 1 player only. have fun!


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2013-03-08 05:50:00

Author:
Unknown User


water tunnel needs an air valve thing, if you dont get in the rocket thing perfectly first time you drown every time, i'm struggling at the moment, sorry.

sometimes i swim between the rocket and the big metal circle and i just die for no reason, too, like i'm squashed
2013-03-08 16:19:00

Author:
Unknown User


Got it queued.2013-03-08 21:40:00

Author:
Unknown User


You have some cool ideas

Very nice level
2013-03-09 01:55:00

Author:
avundcv
Posts: 2526


thank you for playing my levels and for the feed back, greatly appreciated.2013-03-10 01:23:00

Author:
Unknown User


adding to the queue2013-03-10 06:27:00

Author:
biorogue
Posts: 8424


Queued!

EDIT:

Ok so i played this level, and i really liked it! The armosphere is really cool and the little bits of sticler pannel art all over the place is really well done! My only gripe is the water tunnel, i drowned ! Overall 7.5/10 nice level!
2013-03-12 01:06:00

Author:
dolphins-r-lame
Posts: 281


I fixed the water tunnel part , added and changed a few things throughout the level too.Thanks for the tip.2013-03-12 12:56:00

Author:
Unknown User


For this one, I still liked the idea of your sticker panel objects acting as the decorations for the level, but in this case I felt there was a lack of depth, both visually and with gameplay. There didn't feel like there was a lot of use of all of the layers, at least in the beginning, but they improve when the players reach the end. (By the way, is the level link necessary?)

I had similar issues with the rocket tunnel, although thanks to where it got stuck I was able to finish it. Plus it seems that you've already adjusted it since then, so that works out.

Other than that, I noticed that players can climb the walls to the left of the starting point and jump off the level. Most won't do that, but fixing it could help the quality a bit.

I like the atmosphere of the level and there are definitely good ideas at play, it could just use some improvements and expansions.
Good job.
2013-03-13 19:37:00

Author:
xxMATEOSxx
Posts: 1787


Thanks for the good advise.2013-03-14 07:17:00

Author:
Unknown User


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