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Eve (Sad Short Film)

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"Eve" is about the bond between a mother and her daughter. It is very short but I think has quite an beautiful and emotional touch.
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2013-02-15 22:04:00

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sounds sweet, queued2013-02-16 01:58:00

Author:
biorogue
Posts: 8424


Hey Doc just finished playing your film, and I think it could of been better. In the beginning all it showed was a flashback then the picture on the bench of the mom and daughter and that's it. I know its a short film but that was little to short. In my opinion you could of extended this by showing them two spending more time together and doing other things then have the sad parts come in such as showing what happened to the daughter etc... then ending it with the mother going back to the bench were her daughter once played then leaving. Something like that, so if you could add more to it i think it'll turn out great .2013-02-16 02:45:00

Author:
Sabre_
Posts: 653


Sabre wrote exactly what I felt while watching your movie, so I totally agree to him.

If you'll extend this movie, please let me know about it. I like to watch it again in this case
2013-02-17 01:58:00

Author:
avundcv
Posts: 2526


It's a very touching movie, but it's not complete, it will be best if we have seen why Eve is dead, or more thing like she was a baby. I almost cry2013-02-17 19:30:00

Author:
Anatole
Posts: 35


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