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School ep1

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http://lbp.me/v/c5mmqp
Please check out my level and let me know what you think.
http://lbp.me/p/qtdq7m0
2013-01-11 17:06:00

Author:
Unknown User


1st, welcome to LBPC! Always good to see new members here. 2nd, you might want to put a little more effort into "selling" your level. Basically, that's what you're doing, it's your job, your duty. You are advertising for people to play your level. Try and make the thread more exciting to the reader. What is the level about? What are some features of the level? What type of game play is it? etc, etc. If you need help with any of that, just let me know, be more than happy to help out. queued.2013-01-11 17:26:00

Author:
biorogue
Posts: 8424


http://i9.lbp.me/img/bl/g73383-359bf95f.png
School Ep 1 (http://lbp.me/v/c5mmqp)

In this level you wake up late for school. You must get there on time no matter what, or your dad will blow his top. So you may have to "borrow" a vehicle or two and dodge some traffic.

http://i5.lbp.me/img/fs/8e52138dd2b99fbcaa6876a3e9b8b79ae21badd0.jpg




EDIT:

Is that better? and thanks for the input. I tried using this template earlier and I was doing something wrong. at least now I have an image to go with it right?
2013-01-12 08:35:00

Author:
Unknown User


Got around to playing this one lbp1, here's my thoughts.

It was pretty cool to hit the traffic portion. That shows real dedication to getting to school, (or fear, whichever).

However, while individual objects, such as the cars look ok, the overall level can use more visual detail. I didn't think the preset city background quite covered it, and there was only a limited amount on the ground. The look was lacking and monotonous.
There were also a few visible sensors throughtout the level, but I'm not sure if that was by design.

Otherwise, it played out like a standard vehicle race. I'm glad you incorporated different forms of travel, be it bike, traffic hopping, or boat. It could just use more depth, both visually and in how well it flows.
2013-01-15 00:52:00

Author:
xxMATEOSxx
Posts: 1787


Super! thanks for your time and input. I have now added quite a bit of decoration. I think it helps a lot. The sensors I left in, they give you an idea something should happen there. The traffic hopping was the reason I made the level in the first place. If I hadn't had that idea I probably would never have made this level. Which would have sucked because I wouldn't have had all this fun making levels the last couple of months. And actually learning how some of this creating works.2013-01-15 17:29:00

Author:
Unknown User


I did not realize how difficult it is nowadays to get some education
You have some nice ideas in your level.
I enjoyed playing it
2013-01-16 17:06:00

Author:
avundcv
Posts: 2526


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