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Hello, community. This is a 'film' project I had in mind called The Watchers... Plot: Someone is always watching....always...yet things are never as they seem...Josh Flitzer, a 16 year old boy lives in the year 2015...in the US. A year in which there is an economic turndown, and violence roam the streets... But he doesn't have to worry... His parents are the few people that are rich. Scott Flitzer, his father, is a famous inventor...one day, a organized crime group,The Laughters, start a riot to steal from Mr.Scott's riches. In the process Scott's son,Josh, dies in a car accident. Now Mr.Scott must invent the greatest creation he was given. An invention that will change the world.Well, what do you think?

2012-12-30 15:23:00 Author: Sonicthefellow7 Posts: 100

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I assume what you mean is by inventing the greatest creation he was ever given is that he is going to attempt to either revive or replace his son with some invention, maybe a robot version of his son or something. In that case, what's the point of the crime group in the story? It seems like their only role is to kill the son in a car accident. Can't he just die in an ordinary accident? Also, why is it set in a time of economic downturn, sickness and violence? For a touching story about a father's love for his son a lot of those background elements (sickness, violence, economy, crime groups) seem unnecessary. Not only will it consume thermo in your level but including them will also leave viewers unsatisfied that the unnecessary parts of your story were never developed or expanded upon. Try to look for a purpose to include things into your story, think of what they add to the relationship between the father and his son.

2012-12-31 10:02:00 Author: Seku Posts: 65

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Yes. There is a further role for the crime organization but revealing it would ruin the whole story. It is set in a time of economic turndown and violence because it gives a reason for the crime organization to exist. Because they despise the rich. I also forgot to mention that they create a riot all over the country. This is part father and son story and part of it has to do with the government. All of theses things add to their relationship...I can't reveal how because it would spoil the story. But thanks for asking these great questions. EDIT: 43455 "Keep your eyes open...you'll never know where they'll take you..." This Christmas of 2015 Archie, the Knight Owl who seeks crime is coming! Evil doers beware! Owls have good vision, and Archie is no exception... You better watch out You better not cry Better not pout I'm telling you why Archie is coming to town He's making a list And checking it twice Gonna find out Who's naughty and nice Archie is coming to town He sees you when you're sleeping He knows when you're awake He knows if you've been bad or good So be good for goodness sake! O! You better watch out! You better not cry Better not pout I'm telling you why Archie is coming to town Archie is coming to town! In other news: Find out how Scott Flitzer revived a human being! We interviewed his friend,Agustus! This isn't Sci-Fi... It's REAL! The New York Times (Well, seems we have some plot points revealed and foreshadowed...) EDIT: Archibald is a given name or surname of Old French and Old High German, and later lowland Scottish, origin whose meaning is "genuine, bold, brave." As a given name it is often shortened to "Archie" and is commonly referred to as Archie by the social media. (-Wikipedia. More info... And the last....)

2012-12-31 19:20:00 Author: Sonicthefellow7 Posts: 100

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