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Temple of Deep Death - By cakito123

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Hello guys! I've published my last level forever (probably) because my ps3 was stolen and I've created on the ps3 of my cousin =/
But that's ok! is a platform level, and it have a boss at the end of the level. This is my first boss that I made, hope it's good enough to enjoy... Could you guys give some feedback?

here it is some images:

http://i3.lbp.me/img/ft/f43ff7dbea1c7474d8ea91a2315b8877986dc744.jpg

http://i1.lbp.me/img/ft/b218b5d108d78968d82f62bd3c3c9e3e7dc9eb55.jpg

lbp.me link:

http://lbp.me/v/h7h4re

hope you enjoy! Thanks!
http://lbp.me/v/h7h4re		2012-12-25 19:50:00

Author:
cakito123
Posts: 353

cool, it's queued2012-12-25 20:22:00

Author:
biorogue
Posts: 8424

any reviews? ):2012-12-26 17:34:00

Author:
cakito123
Posts: 353

Yes Sir, here is a short review

I really like your level. You've created a cool gameplay with some very cool obstacles!
I enjoyed paying your level.
(yes, I know: it really is a short review )		2012-12-28 15:24:00

Author:
avundcv
Posts: 2526

There were some really cool bits of gameplay in this. You made great use of the new wormholes and the jumping monkeys were just awesome. I genuinely laughed out out loud. As for that PESKY bald eagle, well I'm speechless lol. You really made me wish I'd left him locked up in his cage. The ingratitude!

Your boss was cool but there were some sections where you could completely avoid the danger by hanging on to the sponge (I suppose the eagle did make some amends there, lol!).

Anyway, I'm truly sorry to hear this is your last PS3 level. You have such a quirky and inventive style. You'll be missed.		2012-12-29 17:41:00

Author:
shropshirelass
Posts: 1455

#Promoted 2012-12-29 17:54:00

Author:
LBPSneakPeeks
Posts: 65

There were some really cool bits of gameplay in this. You made great use of the new wormholes and the jumping monkeys were just awesome. I genuinely laughed out out loud. As for that PESKY bald eagle, well I'm speechless lol. You really made me wish I'd left him locked up in his cage. The ingratitude!

Your boss was cool but there were some sections where you could completely avoid the danger by hanging on to the sponge (I suppose the eagle did make some amends there, lol!).

Anyway, I'm truly sorry to hear this is your last PS3 level. You have such a quirky and inventive style. You'll be missed.

Ooooh, thanks!!
Don't worry, I'm still making levels on my PS vita.
The level ''Kiwi VS orange - The tournament (Level 1 - Chizz)'' that you spotlighted was mine! Thanks for being so awesome, and sorry for my bad english!		2013-01-01 05:24:00

Author:
cakito123
Posts: 353

Played this today, enjoyed it quite a bit.

There is some very nice platforming in this level, and I enjoyed the variety of elements you were able to add, as each section felt like a unique challenge, even when it used familiar elements. I particularly liked the use of wormholes and the grappling hook on the flipping platforms.

My favorite part about the level is the character design. The costumes on the monkeys and eagles was a nice use of sackbots, and I almost felt sorry beating up the boss at the end- he looked so happy to see me!

A few nitpicks:

-At the start of the level, there is an area that spikes sharply downward, as another platform rises upward to form a wall. It seemed an odd place for a gap like that, and might look better as solid material.
-The neon material seemed a little out of place in an ancient temple of death, particularly on the large circular platform covers. Making a spiky circle might have fit with the theme a little more, as you already have spikes elsewhere in the level
-During the boss fight, the eagle just disappeared, but it might look nicer if he flew away afterwards.

None of these are major flaws though, and overall I enjoyed my play through quite a bit. Thanks for the level 		2013-07-25 03:01:00

Author:
Burnvictim42
Posts: 3322


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