Archive: 11 posts

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Hello everybody! I present you my new level called "Christmas valley". It's a platformer, as usual Have fun guys, and merry Christmas ^^ --> http://lbp.me/v/g5ycw1 http://i8.lbp.me/img/ft/9c864a29473a85a8753377f3d1d65f853acd87f4.jpg

2012-12-21 15:34:00 Author: alain251 Posts: 128

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playing in you level, go left(into dip)...jump to front layer then go right,you'll fall to bottom of level...other then that..looks beautiful..ok...happening in another spot again...walked out of level, after losing grabinator,after 2 bouncepads and a round pink/purple grab circle(turning)..so replaying it again...happened again same place...I'd be happy to go in game with you to show you wher I mean

2012-12-21 19:48:00 Author: realtime Posts: 63

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Played your level alain, seems like your on a roll coming out with new levels every other week almost lol. Anyways I played it liked the visuals of the level and the gameplay. I didn't encounter any glitches though everything ran smoothly and overall the level was great good job.

2012-12-21 20:46:00 Author: Sabre_ Posts: 653

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sweet! it's queued

2012-12-22 15:42:00 Author: biorogue Posts: 8424

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I figured I'd leave some feedback. For starters, it looks nice. Nothing amazing, but it was pleasant to look at. It's pretty much your standard Christmassy decoration, which is good. The gameplay itself left a lot to be desired. There's nothing particularly offensive about it, it's just full of very standard and generic obstacles in tandem with long, empty stretches. The boxes were a bit obnoxious because of the point placement. When the box you through accidentally hits bubbles, it gets launched back (usually into the abyss, causing me to repeat the entire obstacle). At this point, I'd like to see some more advanced stuff coming from you. You're clearly A-OK in the visuals and presentation department, but the gameplay just doesn't grab me or motivate me to finish the level. Maybe spend a bit more time working on levels rather than shooting out a new one every week? At any rate, it's a decent, good looking level with gameplay that verges on tedious. I'd like to see more original stuff coming from you because I think you can handle it. (Probable spotlight / Merry Christmas bonner stars)

2012-12-22 18:40:00 Author: bonner123 Posts: 1487

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@real time : I've fixed the fail where we fall out of the level, and now, everything work well. But actually, I don't really see where you were locked at the second time? @sabre : Glad that you enjoyed ^^ @bonner : Yes man, totally understand what you say. I knew that my gameplay isn't really original, but as boring as you say, I should clearly do lot of effort! And yes, I did 2 levels in less than one month, that's maybe too quick... Thanks for your comment so

2012-12-22 19:50:00 Author: alain251 Posts: 128

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@ Alain...there was nothing boring about your level. Take it from someone who understands the effort required to do what you did. I thoroughly enjoyed every minute of it...from great stage details to fun gameplay. For a 13 year old, you are far beyond your years as a Creator. Great job and BRAVO!

2012-12-25 13:30:00 Author: RickRock_777 Posts: 1567

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I'm 15 years old rickrock, but nevermind ^^' Thank you for your nice comment!

2012-12-25 19:34:00 Author: alain251 Posts: 128

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Okay, just to clarify what I said: I fully realize the effort that goes into making levels and I guess I have higher standards when playing levels but that's how we improve: criticism makes creators better. You're a pretty good creator, I just think that original ideas would make your good levels excellent. When I was fifteen, I wasn't able to make levels half as good as yours. @Rick, I don't need condescending remarks highlighting that I don't know what goes into making levels. I do, and have for several years (even before LBP). Other than that, keep on improving because you're on your way to becoming great. Have a happy Christmas.

2012-12-25 20:09:00 Author: bonner123 Posts: 1487

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@ Alain...sorry, I was a year off on your age. But considering everything, I found your level to be awesome. @ Bonner...nowhere in my comments did I mention you. Not sure why you would jump to that conclusion. I merely responded to Alain's comment about his level being boring.

2012-12-25 20:51:00 Author: RickRock_777 Posts: 1567

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Take it from someone who understands the effort required to do what you did. This seemed like it was referring to me, but I'm probably just sleep deprived. Sorry for the misunderstanding hopefully.

2012-12-25 21:25:00 Author: bonner123 Posts: 1487

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