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Grave Terror
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| http://i3.lbp.me/img/bl/ac30aea049457c2abb6917a70b03715ef915bd0b.png Grave Terror (http://lbp.me/v/-mg884) (You encounter a group of boys after school who tell you that their friend has mysteriously disappeared, so you agree to help them look for him, however; there is more going on here than meets the eye). http://i0.lbp.me/img/ft/880fb53d45406510559e0c914d69b2a9d087133a.jpg http://i3.lbp.me/img/ft/173ad712ad9473a26a0cd8b3ffd0d685b3171c2f.jpg http://i2.lbp.me/img/ft/ac2beae39e3576857a8b5b450593e6f0c0cad51d.jpg I would love critique on my level. It is a slower paced level with cutscenes throughout and a bit of reading. I'm trying to learn and expand my knowledge of the logic, and I love figuring out how to make complex things. This level is the first one I made where I used all of my knowledge of LBP2 logic. There are two different endings for the level. It is also a Platform/Puzzle/Story type of level, and there is a lot of text to read through. I was experimenting with cutscenes and I made them flow at the reader/player's own pace. EDIT: The lbp.me url wasn't showing up, so I'm including it here. http://lbp.me/v/-mg884 | 2012-11-03 01:08:00 Author: Unknown User  |
| adding to the queue | 2012-11-03 07:03:00 Author: biorogue  Posts: 8424 |
Hey just played this level not to long ago, here's my feedback. When I first got into the level, I noticed the classroom and hallway wasn't as detailed as I think it could of been but the acting and dialogue was pretty okay to me. Also along with the outside, I think the graveyard and other scenes could of been a tab bit better but putting aside the visuals, the story was okay to me. You did the cutscenes well and the teleport to different areas worked fine. The hell like area was okay, I almost grabbed majority of the skulls before I ran into that sackbot that said grab the orb instead lol. But yeah overall this level was worth playing. Got a yay from me  | 2012-11-04 23:27:00 Author: Sabre_  Posts: 653 |
| Alright. I appreciate that Sabre. I'm always pushing myself to do better in my levels, and that helps to give me a direction to focus on. =3 I'm glad your overall experience was a yay, and I'll work hard to make sure that I improve my designing skills on LBP2. | 2012-11-05 20:48:00 Author: Unknown User |
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