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Spooky-Halloween Mansion(Platformer 1P)

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Hey guys!
I just published my new level 'Spooky-Halloween Mansion'. It is a platformer for 1P only. Here's the link: http://lbp.me/v/fngvj6
I would appreciate if you give it a go
Some pics:

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I hope you enjoy, have fun!
http://lbp.me/v/fngvj6
2012-09-22 13:55:00

Author:
Pyrotrooper91
Posts: 337


Hey Pyro! I just tried your level! Here's some feedback for it:

INTRODUCTION

The level badge was nice, but it seemed to me that the colorful circle that surrounded the image was too big. The name and description are pretty great. Too add images to your level thread, just go to lbp.me or whetever you've got your pics stored, copy the Image URL and then paste it here with a and tags. And you get this:

http://i6.lbp.me/img/ft/746043b3a9beda04d845e90993ba80c635324c9d.jpg
ROFL I loved that picture from Deka...

LEVEL

The first thing I noticed about the level was the ambientation. It was so perfectly crafted, its the only Haloween level that feels creepy, even kinda scary. The music fits so perfectly well! The gameplay elements are wide and well designed. My only complain so far are the decorations. Even though its obvious you put a superb amount of effort to make this, I still feel the level is somewhat empty at parts. Anyway, I had to shut up when I saw this:

http://ie.lbp.me/img/ft/6ee37d1396d1f83b82a55f962cc41ba77a874d4b.jpg

That's the most awesome thing I've seen in the whole weekend!

So... That's the thing. Sometimes perfectly and jaw-dropping scenarios, and sometimes empty-feeling producer.

And then I found... A GLITCH OH NOES! Even though it happened to me only once, look at this:

http://ic.lbp.me/img/ft/fdc574ccb215c51435584d4ea02dc4dff46996aa.jpg

The moving books were doing fine until I grabbed one and it somehow lost its path and send me right to my premature death. In my second try everything worked fine.

I liked the zombie parts but they were... Certainly unexpetced. So I died a couple of times before realizing what was going on. In a personal note, here's the number of secrets I found:

http://i5.lbp.me/img/ft/015a150eb92b7773ef20400eda89715af2a78dcc.jpg

Lol, what a failure. Anyway, I liked that some of them are well-hidden, that's a nice challenge for those score hunters.

THE GRADES

Gameplay 3.5/5 It was good, but nothing out of this world. To be honest, its the only thing of the level I didn't really enjoy. And as I mentioned earlier, there are somebugs
Graphics 4/5 Sometimes espectacular, sometimes not very satisfying. Specially in the train ride (jaja I loved the train) everything felt very empty.
Sound 5/5 Whoever made that music. Is a genious. And it fits the theme so well I... I... Ehmmm... Will give you my favorite explanation for that:

IT IS A http://i1240.photobucket.com/albums/gg495/yugnar/6fbf328c.jpg soundtrack you have here.

Overall 4/5 Excellent level! Just some minor fixing, and it is certainly a cool-pages worthy habitant! Great job Pyro!
2012-09-22 16:16:00

Author:
yugnar
Posts: 1478


Thanks yugnar! As for the books part, for some reason they break... I don't know how to fix them And yes I would put more details but it reached the overheat... I hate overheat! Anyways, thanks again for your kind words, it's much appreciated buddy!2012-09-22 19:52:00

Author:
Pyrotrooper91
Posts: 337


cool, adding to the queue2012-09-22 20:47:00

Author:
biorogue
Posts: 8424


Hope you enjoy Bio 2012-09-23 06:26:00

Author:
Pyrotrooper91
Posts: 337


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