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http://lbp.me/v/ff75cw After a month of hard work, I finally finished this level. You are a wanderer out in Eart looking for clean water only radiation can be found. How will you survive? The Dam! There must be a way to make the water pure! Venture there to do the unthinkable. Risk your own life to save mankind? Or allow this Mad Scientist complete his last task.... Two Endings, but the majority of you will get the good ending. Fear not at the end you will get a sticker allowing you to spawn near the end. Links to pictures: Sorry http://lbp.me/v/ff75cw/photos That Link will show all 5 images. I hope you really enjoy it & give me some Feedback. Thanks! ^_^

2012-09-10 02:38:00 Author: DawnBreaker_23 Posts: 568

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Just played it and i did like some things and really didn't care for some other things. I'll start off with the bad. The grammar used throughout the level was poor. There are a lot of misspellings and some lines that don't make sense. The direction of the level was bad as well. I did not know where to go after i pulled the switch and got in that long cut scene with the depressed zombie looking guy. I'm also confused on the part when the water rises and everyone dies.......who says boom? does liquid radiation make that sound when it touches someone? I don't know. I'm confused. The scenery can be "purified" as well. It was kind of bland. I also got confused during the part that you go under water... If you put the scooba suit on in the building and go underwater through that hidden passage, you don't die. However. If you try to go outside in the water... you die? I liked the usage of the logic in most of the areas of "activation. What i mean is the things that happen when you hit a switch and stuff. Some of the platforms were quite hard to see but i did see some unique elements i haven't seen in platformers before. I also liked the uniqueness of your characters. They were costumed well and looked like they belonged in a post apocalyptic era. All in all. Give it some appearance changes and spiff up the gameplay just a tad and you have a top notch level here. Good luck. I'll be back in a while to check ur updates! For F4F please check out my level Lost Underground https://lbpcentral.lbp-hub.com/index.php?t=73669-Lost-Underground-My-First-Platformer and please leave your feedback there as well.

2012-09-10 06:49:00 Author: curtislarkin Posts: 157

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adding to the queue

2012-09-10 16:40:00 Author: biorogue Posts: 8424

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