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I published my first platformer in LBP2! Describe: A production by PyroTrooper91 and DeKa1357. The autumn begins and the leaves turn red, orange and yellow. Bounce and swing around in this colorful autumnal level. The best time of the year. Music by Hug-Of-War. [Version 1.0] http://littlesigplanet.com/sigs/level/fdtzjc/popit_meditation/0/sig.png (http://lbp.me/v/fdtzjc) http://ie.lbp.me/img/ft/e8ebbbcbae93ca092dadce63393943256f8e6fa4.jpg http://i3.lbp.me/img/ft/123f103605faf5d51dff08c70ba99f4f029573cd.jpg http://i4.lbp.me/img/ft/b5465a40234de6feed6e16c4a03b407f0530846e.jpg A second version of my level is in work!

2012-09-08 20:20:00 Author: DeKa1357 Posts: 190

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Very Very well done. Loved the Autumn atmosphere

2012-09-08 20:37:00 Author: curtislarkin Posts: 157

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got it queued. You should really post some pics to further entice people to play it.

2012-09-08 21:28:00 Author: biorogue Posts: 8424

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Got it queud and heres your level link. http://lbp.me/v/fd13ks

2012-09-08 21:37:00 Author: Lbphart3 Posts: 813

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Hey Deka! I just finished playing the level. So here's a little feedback: *A preliminar note in my reviews: You may see that "The Grades" I give at the end of my review can be the same than the grades of a "different quality" level. I usually adapt my grades in order to be fair according to the creator experience, and as it seems you even have an MM pick I may seem to be a bit tough in my grading. PRESENTATION Yep, I loved the badge. The first impression the level gave me was that it would be a really great experience. The Autumnish decorations were used in a theme I rarley see, like a rocky forest. For the thread, I would suggest adding some pictures so that people get interested in the theme. LEVEL Ok, I usually play and review in the same time, and so I can update photos of things I didn't like and things I did, anyway, this time I didn't get the chance. Anyway, I do remember basically everything, and here are my two only complaints. 1-Luckily you uploaded a pic of yourself in here... http://i4.lbp.me/img/ft/9e4fbbd240eec1b581709ff02211344aab079c17.jpg I got stuck in this part for a while. You should add an arrow or something that tells you that you need to grab the sponge to the left to change layers and continue the level, because this part seemed like a Dead-end. 2-Sorry, no pic this time, anyway, when you have to go down through a series of wheels that are really close to each other... Ok, it was incredibly annoying. Adding more space, and making the wheels bigger would do the thing. THE GRADES What everybody loves/hates! The grades! Gameplay: 3/5 I know its your first attempt at a platformer, but I didn't really see any innovative ideas, it felt short and some parts need polishing. Graphics 4/5 Simple at times, but the strong point for this one. Sound 3/5 I liked the music, but the sound effects could have been better and much more, better placed, etc. Overall 3/5 Great work! Again, do not misunderstand this grades, as they take into consideration your previous experience. I know you're more like a mini-game designer, so this is a pretty awesome first try at a platformer!

2012-09-08 21:56:00 Author: yugnar Posts: 1478

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Got it queud and heres your level link. http://lbp.me/v/fd13ks Its in his signature

2012-09-08 21:58:00 Author: curtislarkin Posts: 157

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Thanks for feedback! I need to publish it again! I will publish it today at 6:30 pm in CET (my time zone in germany)! I hope you can help me to push it then! Push means a Play and Yay! Can you help me then? Here are some pictures: http://1.1.1.2/bmi/ib.lbp.me/img/fs/09b91d4a82fd385eac6af72ddec06957a44a2a0a.jpg http://1.1.1.2/bmi/i1.lbp.me/img/fs/2d11210721762af73298e81fc1d0d6595301a747.jpg http://1.1.1.2/bmi/ic.lbp.me/img/fs/63cf360155ec88aaa02a34709976709d556e6d76.jpg EDIT: I published it new! Here is the link: http://lbp.me/v/fdtzjc Help to push please!

2012-09-09 09:06:00 Author: DeKa1357 Posts: 190

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This is an astonishing platformer with amazing visuals and good gameplay I love the whole design and the details. I'm glad to help on such a great level like this! Outstanding job mate

2012-09-09 20:26:00 Author: Pyrotrooper91 Posts: 337

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Thanks for so much good reviews!

2012-09-10 17:16:00 Author: DeKa1357 Posts: 190

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This is a great little platformer. The autumn theme is consistent through the whole level, giving it a sort of mellow, easily-paced feeling. The visuals are pleasant and somehow soothing, even in the face of imminent death by little spikey cactus-things. Added to that is a really catchy tune which blends perfectly to create an overall happy-go-lucky vibe. The platforming itself is equally solid, and a decent amount of playtesting obviously went into this to make sure the whole level flowed. The only area that confounded me for a few seconds was, as mentioned above, the grab-pad behind the fence. When I was trying to speed-run through the level, I kept popping back into the front layer. That was, of course, a fault of mine for being too anxious to continue, and I see no real need to put in any sort of fix for that. The length is, for the type of level it is, pretty much perfect. It offers enough play to let one dig on the atmosphere, and yet it's short enough to warrant multiple playthroughs simply for the sake of appreciating the level. The advert towards the end, encouraging one to join a forum, sort of takes away from the flow of the action, and could be a bit less obtrusive (perhaps something not requiring a pause in the gameplay). All around a fun, cute, satisfying platformer. Played, Aced, Yay'd, and Hearted. Thanks for the entertainment, and well done!

2012-09-11 00:07:00 Author: EvilWuun Posts: 152

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Thank you for your review!

2012-09-12 08:51:00 Author: DeKa1357 Posts: 190

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Hey Deka, I've played at your level some days ago! I have to say that is really really good for a first platformer. I love the design, good choice of decoration and materials. The gameplay isn't awesome but it's good, simple and fun! I think you have got a real potential in plateform! You should continue man ;-) Good luck for your next creation ^^

2012-09-12 19:42:00 Author: alain251 Posts: 128

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This is a fantastic nature level i relly loved the details that you put in to it and the small hazerds the music was awsome you made great use in the Autumn pack..Theres one part tho i had a tuff time finishing it.Its at the end every time i tryed to pass over the green spike i died im thinking mabe its just a little close to the spinner after a few times i made it to the end.Other than that i really loved this level. http://if.lbp.me/img/fl/f9f2f0818fbedaf683230f7b2809d3c14add451e.jpg

2012-09-13 04:11:00 Author: Lbphart3 Posts: 813

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YAY! Thanks! Mostly good reviews! I will make more! Second part is in work!

2012-09-13 16:15:00 Author: DeKa1357 Posts: 190

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It looks good. That's about it. The gameplay has been seen before, as have the visuals. It's well done (as in the sense that there's nothing wrong with it), but it's pretty unoriginal and boring (and short). My only gameplay complaint is that the conveyor belt thing can and should be made stronger. There's absolutely no reason this level needs to be single player only and increasing the strength on that obstacle would make it so the sponges won't fall off the track. Adjust some cameras as well, and this level would be multiplayer friendly. ‎ ٢‎ ٣‎ ٤ / whatever bonner stars.

2012-09-14 23:11:00 Author: bonner123 Posts: 1487

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The thermometer is full! Only 1 Player!

2012-09-15 11:47:00 Author: DeKa1357 Posts: 190

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