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Atomic Fortress

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Level Link: http://lbp.me/v/cp4n89
http://lbp.me/v/http://lbp
This is a little level I made in May. Hope you guys like!
Here's a video of my level, my friend SasukeUchica did it for me:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=b4boJ2Wyfr4
2012-09-07 23:41:00

Author:
P-I-M-P-I
Posts: 45


Okay, this level is pretty good. I think you can do a better job of selling it though, unless you're so confident that nothing needs to be said. The gameplay isn't original per se but it's always fun and fluid. The visuals are also really nice, detailed and colourful, just like the post-apocalyptic wasteland will be. There are still issues with the level feeling as if it's just floating in space that could be addressed by extending or adding some pillars (or something along those lines). Other than that, there isn't much to say. Of you came up with more inventive gameplay and somehow got rid of the lag, this would be much better (and it's already pretty solid, so that'd make this level ultra-solid, just like certain things I like).

Super competence / 22.7^546 bonner stars
2012-09-07 23:50:00

Author:
bonner123
Posts: 1487


A nother great level by you P-I-M-P-I..The details are good but they dont stand out as much as time to ring the bells did.I enjoyed the game play the visuals are good the theme some what felt more like portal with the run down buildings and over groth.
http://ia.lbp.me/img/fl/e2a9dbc86fbcf96400ee6346a5e96da2d206141c.jpg

the game play was easy wasin't very diffacult but it was funn,Sadly it was short But theres a part two .

The music fit the part were im in a chamber made me think of dead space lol.http://i5.lbp.me/img/fl/d05c025807f20d8d1c14f4b56281f5817068b8b6.jpg

I just wish there was more details in the back ground like there is going a round the level.Other than that its a good platformer.
2012-09-07 23:53:00

Author:
Lbphart3
Posts: 813


Woooo new level! Level! Leveellll! = Consider it queued, hopefully I'll make some feedback for this.2012-09-08 00:29:00

Author:
yugnar
Posts: 1478


played it, loved it, queued it again! I agree with bonner that you are doing a terrible promotion job man. We all know that you make good levels, but this thread doesn't reflect that. People who don't know you, may look at this thread and go, "meh" and pass it right by. Take a look at this tutorial by Rialrees that will show you and give you templates on posting your level. the tutorial is here. (https://lbpcentral.lbp-hub.com/index.php?t=73343-LBPC-Showcase-Essential-Guide-(For-Dummies))2012-09-08 00:58:00

Author:
biorogue
Posts: 8424


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