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Pictures: http://i1019.photobucket.com/albums/af317/Sabre_LBP/APhoto_11-1.jpg http://i1019.photobucket.com/albums/af317/Sabre_LBP/APhoto_12-1.jpg http://i1019.photobucket.com/albums/af317/Sabre_LBP/APhoto_13-1.jpg http://i1019.photobucket.com/albums/af317/Sabre_LBP/APhoto_14-1.jpg Platform through this Progressive Factory as you come across many challenges. Can you find where Flo secrets are hidden? What are you waiting for then, jump in and play..Hope you all enjoy it http://lbp.me/v/d6wfgm http://lbp.me/v/d6wfgm

2012-08-28 02:58:00 Author: Sabre_ Posts: 653

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Looks quite nice Sabre! Its good to know how the competition is going, I'll give it a go. Anyway, there is no lbp.me link! :O It would help much!

2012-08-28 03:11:00 Author: yugnar Posts: 1478

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The link is at the bottom

2012-08-28 03:57:00 Author: Sabre_ Posts: 653

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Lololol sorry, this iPad browser sometimes fails to load stuff. Maybe I'm also blind or something.

2012-08-28 04:02:00 Author: yugnar Posts: 1478

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Awesome contest entry level. The level is filled with clever platforming obstacles, and the music from Velvet-Audio fitted well. The visuals looked pretty good thanks to well-used colors and the Progressive feeling. One thing I noticed in this level is the visible tool around the scoreboard. Good luck on the contest, Sabre_. VISUALS: 5/5 SOUND: 5/5 GAMEPLAY: 5/5 OVERALL: A yay and heart.

2012-08-28 04:34:00 Author: JustinArt Posts: 1314

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cool, queued

2012-08-28 13:15:00 Author: biorogue Posts: 8424

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@JustinArt, thanks for the feedback man glad you liked it @Bio, Hope you like it!

2012-08-28 15:25:00 Author: Sabre_ Posts: 653

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Ok, here's my feedback Sabre! Ok, in the beginning of the level I thought at first the decorations didn't really fit. Man, was I wrong! All the decorations, stickers and music fit perfectly to make a breathtaking adventure! Ok, in the first room, I didn't really know what to do because I hadn't seen the 2nd button in the top. Did I mentioned I'm kinda blind sometimes? It would be good to add an arrow though. The wheels challenge was great, then I came to this luminous floor with Flo (nice costume) advertising stuff. Lol, I hadn't understand what that thing was (the one with the prices) until Flo expalined it! Lololol. The only thing I don't really like of this part is that awkward luminous floor. It seems just to weird. Just my opinion, though. And then the decoration returned to what I like. This part was OK, and the spinning decos were just perfect! Nice idea for that one. Then there was more stuff, and I arrived to the puzzle mini room. I liked it, but I think you could have been slightly more creative when using the grabbable bounce pad. Still it was great! Then more stuff, some adverts really well thought, with some previous investigation (nice move), and a fast-platforming sequence I liked a lot involving bounce pads. And almost instantly it finished. So, here's my grading: Visuals: 3.5/5 Really good, but some parts looked awkward or too simple, and sometimes it went out of theme. Gameplay: 4/5 Some really creative ideas, the spinning wheels challenge repeated more than what I would have liked. Sound: 5/5 Whoa! Who composed the music? Whoever was, it just fitted perfectly! Duration: 4/5 I felt it a bit short, anyway, there were not a lot of advertisments, which is thanked, anyway, I think it had an average length. Average: 4/5 A really strong entry worth of a PSVita! Hearted and yayed obviously, actually I was kinda impressed by the number of plays it had, until I saw you were a Ghost Creator that is. Great work!

2012-08-28 21:59:00 Author: yugnar Posts: 1478

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Thanks for the awesome feedback Yug, I know at some points the visuals could have went off due to how I tried to keep the theme more "progressive" based. The length of the level, I probably could of stretched it to 2 more areas at the most but I ran out of gameplay ideas and surprisingly I guess from using alot of tubes the thermo was at the top not full but close to the top. I jumped into the contest pretty late cause I was gone for awhile so had got it done within 5day period and it turned out great. Glad you liked the level overall, doing some of those progressive rooms through me off of my theme a bit each time but I tried to keep it going best way possible. Thanks again for the feedback

2012-08-28 23:50:00 Author: Sabre_ Posts: 653

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Great contender for the contest man. Each element of the gameplay is fun and entertaining. I'm amazed how quickly you made this level with great gameplay and visuals. Well done bro

2012-08-31 21:18:00 Author: tripple_sss Posts: 250

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