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Desert of Shadows

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Hey guys, I'm new here. At first, I never wanted to go online or use other means of promoting my level. I didn't want to be one of those "heart 4 heart" guys

After making 2 levels, I have realized that unless my level is amazingly amazing, I need to find another way to promote it. Both of my levels get up to 10 plays, and then completely stop being played. (Personally, I think it is partly to do with untrustworthy ratings. For example, someone tagged my platforming level as a machinery level)

I'm not one to brag, but I think my levels are decent and at the least, playable.

If someone wants to try out my new level, Desert of Shadows, please do so and give me feedback (on here or in-game comments). If you are interested, know that it is a silhouette level

my username in-game is logan1223

Thanks for any help
2009-01-11 03:06:00

Author:
cornontheCOD
Posts: 150


Well I actually played it a minute ago, and I do say, it was great!

Pros:
+The transition from dark and shadowy to fully bright and 3D was great!
+Characters were original, and wierd. (Just like mine! )
+When it was shadowy the background objects looked awesome
+Storyline, actually had one
+It was fun

Cons:
-Kinda short, but just long enough
-You had some Story Mode objects, try using only custom content instead.

Good job on the level, 5 stars and hearted.
2009-01-11 03:10:00

Author:
Kog
Posts: 2358


Thanks, for some reason it's not getting played.

what story objects are you referring to specifically?
2009-01-12 00:00:00

Author:
cornontheCOD
Posts: 150


cool bro, i'll add to my list to play

and welcome btw
2009-01-12 00:03:00

Author:
Thee-Flash
Posts: 3154


Thanks, for some reason it's not getting played.

what story objects are you referring to specifically?

The cactus' and some others I forgot
2009-01-12 05:12:00

Author:
Kog
Posts: 2358


bump

10char
2009-01-23 04:49:00

Author:
cornontheCOD
Posts: 150


Playing Shadows now. I think it looks brilliant, and I really don't mind when Story items are used, as long as they don't feature as a centerpiece. since this is a silhouette map, its not really a big issue.
They are fine as a filler.
I found an open patch in the ground just before the Hammer-part, near the beginning. I don't know if it was an intentional pitfall or not, bu it's a pretty cheap death since there's no way to avoid it unless you know it's there.

Erm. Okay, once I got to the big circle, I tried to shoot the vulnerable bits inside, nothing seemed to work, and at one point, something in the wheel broke, and the two outer circles came loose... I don't see any way to progress.
2009-01-23 05:14:00

Author:
Morrinn3
Posts: 493


hmmm, I've never had that happen before, and I've tested the map many times.

sorry, I will try to do something about it
2009-01-23 06:30:00

Author:
cornontheCOD
Posts: 150


It could easily have been just a freak accident. I ran through a second time and this time didn't encounter any errors.
So, cool map. Definitely hearted.
2009-01-23 19:49:00

Author:
Morrinn3
Posts: 493


Thank you, I hope it gets more plays, I didn't know if it was actually fun or not (after testing it over and over it is not so much fun).

Honestly, I think something needs to change with the LBP rating system
2009-01-23 23:20:00

Author:
cornontheCOD
Posts: 150


ill give it a play, check back ill put in an edit with a review.

Also if you have time either play my level, or check out my thread and level a comment =P
2009-01-24 03:32:00

Author:
King_Tubb
Posts: 435


I'll try to remember to play it2009-01-24 07:24:00

Author:
cornontheCOD
Posts: 150


bump

10char
2009-01-24 22:18:00

Author:
cornontheCOD
Posts: 150


bump

10char
2009-02-15 21:12:00

Author:
cornontheCOD
Posts: 150


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