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[/LBPMELEVELURL]http://lbp.me/v/dxtv38[/LBPMELEVELURL]Mundos de papel or Worlds of the paper is my new platformer level, you can play this with your friends Thanks a bombird. The level use the creatinator and gripping hock Is short, fun and hasnt got a argument , play this and comment please http://lbp.me/v/dxtv38 Some screenshots: http://ib.lbp.me/img/fs/dbb10623eec61d9ec3fe4c77543e728a13bc6718.jpg http://ie.lbp.me/img/fs/f2e0adbdff87ef9445ae0ea2822324f42b74f6cb.jpg http://i2.lbp.me/img/fs/c027ed3f8bb07ff4ffb0fb3d4c564e36fea16afd.jpg http://i7.lbp.me/img/fs/3170335b51da9abe46eff7afac732ac0461c80a4.jpg http://i6.lbp.me/img/fs/536fea73f5c0b798068fe0b0dbb46be0c9496c3b.jpg http://i4.lbp.me/img/fs/4d4a11a693c3d8ce9e3816e20faefa60aeafb548.jpg Bye

2012-08-18 11:42:00 Author: Unknown User

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This level has a really unique and quirky feel to it that really makes it a lot of fun. Unfortunately there are a few spots that are a bit rough around the edges and could use some tweaking. First and foremost, the level lags a ton! I think that because there is so much on screen at one time (with much of it moving) the frame rate drops significantly. This makes some areas of the level difficult because the game feels like I'm playing a slow motion level. I suggest spacing things out a bit to help fix the lag issue. http://i9.lbp.me/img/ft/609315d537a23abf3209bb40fe708d9611e46308.jpg In the picture above it shows a switch I had some trouble grabbing because of the pinecones above. I suggest adding a material tweaker to the pinecones and making them ungrabbable. This will prevent the grappling hook from accidentally attaching to them. http://i7.lbp.me/img/ft/ea79b5a239f9a7ab00dda6c9983156759487a8e9.jpg I really liked the way you used the creatinator in the area pictured above. It's very unique! Unfortunately this particular area was very difficult due to the fact that the player must maintain a constant flow of the blue liquid on the target. I'd make the targets a bit larger to make this area a bit easier. http://i1.lbp.me/img/ft/871cd644a4a31e940097741e64338a5de13f6a84.jpg The picture above shows the area where I finally gave up... I made it past the first hump a couple of times but kept dying on the second. I think you really need to rework this area and think of a new way of clearing the obstacles. Perhaps you could make the whole hump the target so that players can hit it with the blue liquid much easier. I hope all of this helps! As for the F4F... If you could check out my Metal Gear Solid thread (https://lbpcentral.lbp-hub.com/index.php?t=72941-Metal-Gear-Sackboy-Unraveling-Stitches) and play through one (or both) of my levels I'd greatly appreciate it. I'm constantly looking for ways to improve my levels so any and all feedback is appreciated. Thanks!

2012-08-18 17:19:00 Author: Unknown User

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Thank you very much for play and coomment! Im going to play your level

2012-08-18 17:45:00 Author: Unknown User

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looks great! adding to the queue

2012-08-18 18:49:00 Author: biorogue Posts: 8424

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Here is my cheap attempt at feedback... compared to the first post... D; This is an excellent platformer. The only serious problem I had was the lag. (even if playing by myself) It wasn't unbearable, but it was a little annoying. Not sure how to fix this but I think less sticker panels would help. I didn't have any gameplay-kinda-problem with any section other than the part where you have to shoot the fire under that half circle thing. (the part with the attract o gel) I'd recommend instead of having to shoot only the fire, set it to cardboard OR fire. I loved the scenery, simplistic yet fun gameplay and length of the level. A heart and yay is what I gave this. F4F: https://lbpcentral.lbp-hub.com/index.php?t=73268-Improper-Backgrounds-(1-player-only)

2012-08-18 20:49:00 Author: morris6267 Posts: 144

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Thanks, Im going to modifiqued the level Everyone, please, play my level

2012-08-19 14:49:00 Author: Unknown User

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Everyone, please, play my level I did a while ago... and I'm still waiting for the F4F... Just a friendly reminder...

2012-08-23 05:45:00 Author: Unknown User

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Sorry, Im going to play your level

2012-08-23 10:56:00 Author: Unknown User

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