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A new beggining

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You start off in a funny looking librabry, and as a hero you listen to her very big problem. It's probably the most important thing to her! However, the story doesn't take place in one area, you head onto a dark factory where she thinks he object has been brought to. You've probably saved a lot of things in your LBP lifetime as a hero, it's time to save another person, once again.
Click the link to start your adventure!
http://lbp.me/v/dvewb0

http://lbp.me/v/dvewb0		2012-08-15 18:29:00

Author:
dermZ96
Posts: 86

dermz! Dangit man. you know I love ya but c'mon. Ya got to tease the reader. Convince them to play this level. Post some eye candy, give a description of the level. What kind of story is it? Post apocalyptic, Pre historic, detective noir, sci-fi revenge? What is it about? Well, obviously you know that I'll queue it. done. Looking forward to seeing what you've cooked up now.2012-08-15 19:01:00

Author:
biorogue
Posts: 8424

Yeah, i have a friend working on a trailer for me...Then there'll be enoguh eye candy for everybody 2012-08-15 19:15:00

Author:
dermZ96
Posts: 86

Here's a couple of shots to entice people

http://id.lbp.me/img/ft/d6d6bca6d0408da6d6bd7ff32232da3125dda1d6.jpg
http://i7.lbp.me/img/ft/db77c9b26366d4d375c987cd2e8fcedbeec3535c.jpg



Played it tonight, it was decent and well laid out. I especially how you synced up the speeds of the cogs to match the doors opening and closing - a nice touch. One nitpicky ting: the scrap paper background you have all over the level was kind of muddy on my screen, you might want to try breaking it up a bit with a material that contrasts with the wood better.

Otherwise, looking forward to part 2!		2012-08-16 08:17:00

Author:
Chazprime
Posts: 587


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