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its a level i just made i dont get many plays and not many hearts

i hope if you like this level you give me a heart and maybe a smiley

maybe try some levels of me

i worked really hard on that pinball i already said that i worked 72 hours on it

F4F

thank you already for playing my new level it will be updated when i find glitches and stuff maybe more funny sounds

byee
2012-08-14 08:14:00

Author:
Unknown User


well, a link would be useful, also, you should post some pictures to further entice people to play it and maybe a better description. You haven't described the table at all. No one wants to hear "I worked hard on it, I don't get many plays" etc. etc. Describe the table. What is the theme of the table? What sets your table apart from the others? Things like that. You have to convince people to queue it. As you worked hard on the level, you also have to work hard on the promotion of said level.2012-08-14 15:52:00

Author:
biorogue
Posts: 8424


Here is ur lbp.me link http://lbp.me/v/ds9qz-

I just want to point out that this is not meant to be harsh or rude or anything like that at all. My comments are meant to help you make it better

I just played your pinball game and it simply doesn't work. You have to hold x just to get the camera to show the whole table. There are a TON of glitches and spots that are visible stuck spots and that spitting sound over and over is quite annoying. In a pinball game, you should NEVER have straight top lines as it causes the ball to rest on top and without a nudge feature, your pretty much screwed and are forced to restart.
The table is more of a landscape rectangle which isn't done in pinball games and the table ts self is quite unattractive. The obstacles seem a bit misplaced as well. You used a wood with no decoration and plasma as lights. You need animations but that's the last thing that you should worry about at this point. I don't know how this happened but i started up the game and a ball cam out when i hit L1. Then i hit L1 again and 2 more came out......? I don't understand whats going on here and as i stated, The most annoying thing is that i have to HOLD X just to have the camera zoomed out.

This is the stationary cam:
http://i6.lbp.me/img/ft/4164e95816d46ea182b5510b5f3b6a9acd4b10c5.jpg

In this picture (while holding x) you can see the multiple balls spawned at once, The lonely blue bar on the right and the whole table:
http://i8.lbp.me/img/ft/828416889de5bae9f696becb31692784c29b5ecc.jpg

In conclusion, It needs 10,000 tons of work. Like me or hate me, I was not trying to beat you up for your work. If you are having trouble, you really should visit the Help section and Tutorials section of this forum and ask. Everyone who monitors those forums are more than happy to help. I know this from personal experience.

If you need inspiration in making a pinball game, you have options. I will include some of my personal favorite pinball games in LBP to help you get inspiration:

Monster Pinball 2 http://lbp.me/v/x0keyx
Pinball Of A Better Tomorrow http://lbp.me/v/x5efkk
WW2: Axis & Allies Pinball http://lbp.me/v/cf462c
Rock Your Body Pinball http://lbp.me/v/-9wbxy

Just work on it and i'm sure you'll come up with something. Good Luck and sorry if I offended you.
2012-08-14 16:25:00

Author:
curtislarkin
Posts: 157


Here is ur lbp.me link http://lbp.me/v/ds9qz-

I just want to point out that this is not meant to be harsh or rude or anything like that at all. My comments are meant to help you make it better

I just played your pinball game and it simply doesn't work. You have to hold x just to get the camera to show the whole table. There are a TON of glitches and spots that are visible stuck spots and that spitting sound over and over is quite annoying. In a pinball game, you should NEVER have straight top lines as it causes the ball to rest on top and without a nudge feature, your pretty much screwed and are forced to restart.
The table is more of a landscape rectangle which isn't done in pinball games and the table ts self is quite unattractive. The obstacles seem a bit misplaced as well. You used a wood with no decoration and plasma as lights. You need animations but that's the last thing that you should worry about at this point. I don't know how this happened but i started up the game and a ball cam out when i hit L1. Then i hit L1 again and 2 more came out......? I don't understand whats going on here and as i stated, The most annoying thing is that i have to HOLD X just to have the camera zoomed out.

This is the stationary cam:
http://i6.lbp.me/img/ft/4164e95816d46ea182b5510b5f3b6a9acd4b10c5.jpg

In this picture (while holding x) you can see the multiple balls spawned at once, The lonely blue bar on the right and the whole table:
http://i8.lbp.me/img/ft/828416889de5bae9f696becb31692784c29b5ecc.jpg

In conclusion, It needs 10,000 tons of work. Like me or hate me, I was not trying to beat you up for your work. If you are having trouble, you really should visit the Help section and Tutorials section of this forum and ask. Everyone who monitors those forums are more than happy to help. I know this from personal experience.

If you need inspiration in making a pinball game, you have options. I will include some of my personal favorite pinball games in LBP to help you get inspiration:

Monster Pinball 2 http://lbp.me/v/x0keyx
Pinball Of A Better Tomorrow http://lbp.me/v/x5efkk
WW2: Axis & Allies Pinball http://lbp.me/v/cf462c
Rock Your Body Pinball http://lbp.me/v/-9wbxy

Just work on it and i'm sure you'll come up with something. Good Luck and sorry if I offended you.

ty i saw the glitch later u made a picture so i fixed it as fast as i could

but i going to make a new 1 because this one is not really well u know it now its not really pinball, it might go faster now because i got the electronics.
2012-08-15 07:55:00

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