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Factory of a Better Yesterday

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An old school metropolis themed platformer with focus on non bounce pad oriented gameplay, I hope you enjoy it.

http://lbp.me/v/de0p5r
2012-07-30 15:51:00

Author:
Squid2723
Posts: 12


Here is your lbp.me link: http://lbp.me/v/de0p5r

I have it queued!
2012-07-30 18:08:00

Author:
crazymario
Posts: 657


An old school metropolis themed platformer with focus on non bounce pad oriented gameplay, I hope you enjoy it.

If you want people to play your level here, you gotta give em an "LBP.me" link. Each level you publish gets it's own page there where it holds a ton of info on your levels. You can just copy and paste the link here



Here's your LBP.me link with your badge, click on the picture.

http://ib.lbp.me/img/bl/24bac1956c59a624bfe908567b4f615270fdf7cc.png (http://lbp.me/v/de0p5r)


Some people can be picky, and want pictures of your level in the thread you post before they play it. You can post pictures by uploading some pictures you've taken of your level, and then grabbing an Image URL by right clicking the picture when you bring it up on LBP.me.

For example:

http://i6.lbp.me/img/ft/dc6949f566c764a23268d062c722e08a0430d1c6.jpg
(Thats you!)

http://i9.lbp.me/img/ft/949843400c7a2dc3fb1f68956fdf0f41937fba35.jpg

Lastly, there are two options to choose from when promoting your level. "F4F" (AKA Feedback For Feedback), or "No F4F"

Feedback for feedback is a cool feature we have here that gives people who give you feedback here, to ask you to play their levels, and give them feedback in return. Though you aren't forced to do this, It reflects better on you if you follow up with all of your F4F requests. (Not every thread or person will have this, so just pay attention to the subheadings on the thread and you'll be a-ok)

That pretty much covers Level posting 101 here. If you have any questions, the stickied threads you see above may help you out.

Cheers!
2012-07-30 18:43:00

Author:
grayspence
Posts: 1990


Alright, I played it, and I thoroughly enjoyed it! It was simple platforming action that incorporated classic elements from LBP1 such as piston bounce pads and creature brains. I found nothing fundamentally wrong with the level, though I do have a few complaints.
There seemed to be a lot of open space. The level looks fine as is, but perhaps you could fill in the large open spaces with moving parts and decorations to make it feel more like a factory. It'd be cool to see the bounce-pad making process going about in the background as I go through the level.
I also feel that the level could be more fun if you added more point bubbles. There are only a few triads of point bubbles spotted about the level, so I can't really get a good multiplier going. Placing point bubbles on a trail would also help show the path I'm supposed to follow which frankly isn't always obvious. AND all these extra bubbles would fill in empty space!
Finally a smaller, more specific complaint: Those sponge bounce pads that you need to grab to activate didn't seem very effective. I found that they didn't bounce me high enough unless I gained momentum. Very annoying and caused me a lot of unnecessary deaths.
But anyways, this level is actually perfectly fine. You clearly put effort into it and it plays really well for the most part. I just think it has the potential to be way more fun. Keep my suggestions in mind!

Please check out my level in my signature and leave feedback!
2012-07-31 03:22:00

Author:
crazymario
Posts: 657


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