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Hello guys ! After many days creating , I published my entry for LBFC1 LBP.me link: http://lbp.me/v/d8bdxj It is a platformer level for 1 player only. Some pics: 41145 41146 41147 41148 41149 41150 Hope you enjoy! Have fun

2012-07-26 12:53:00 Author: Pyrotrooper91 Posts: 337

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Hey there Pyro! You really outdid yourself on the different environments of the level. It looks absolutely stunning! There's definitely some small thing i would change though I'll go through it from beginning till the end. First off, i loved the machine that shows you pictures of the level! Very cool! Now what did i notice next.. Oh yeah, the sliding platforms that you control with the switches. It was pretty hard getting them exactly in the right place. Perhaps it would be easier if the platforms moved just a little bit slower. Also, you might want to put a sound effect when they move (but that's just a nitpick). I noticed some characters say tamam. Does it mean anything? Then, if i recall correctly, there was the memory game. The memory game is very well created! Nice job! It took a little long to complete though.. If it was a level on its own (perhaps with a countdown timer, just to put you under pressure a little ^^) this size would be great! But now i think it slows down the pace of the level a little bit too much. I would definitely take some of the blocks away and make it a bit smaller. A little further on in the level, there's some sponges hanging from ropes, above a pool of water with toxic gas on it. The gas is colored black, and highly contrasts with the water. You should try making it blue, or blue-greenish so it fits better with the water. I think it will look much, much better! In the second part of the level (or third, depending on how you see it ;p) there's this piece of rock coming out of the wall with a bounce pad on it. I only found it after running around for 3 minutes, swimming back and forth a bit, running some more and finally jumping around. If it was supposed to be hidden so well, good job If it wasn't, then i would definitely do something about it! Further on in the level, just before the underwater mini game, the character says: "You will have to the game" or something like that. It looks like there's a verb missing Well, that was about all i could find.. You did a great job on the level, and i enjoyed it a lot! You can decide for your own if you want to do something about the points i just mentioned or not, it's your level

2012-07-26 18:03:00 Author: Deurklink1 Posts: 346

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Hey there Pyro! You really outdid yourself on the different environments of the level. It looks absolutely stunning! There's definitely some small thing i would change though I'll go through it from beginning till the end. First off, i loved the machine that shows you pictures of the level! Very cool! Now what did i notice next.. Oh yeah, the sliding platforms that you control with the switches. It was pretty hard getting them exactly in the right place. Perhaps it would be easier if the platforms moved just a little bit slower. Also, you might want to put a sound effect when they move (but that's just a nitpick). I noticed some characters say tamam. Does it mean anything? Then, if i recall correctly, there was the memory game. The memory game is very well created! Nice job! It took a little long to complete though.. If it was a level on its own (perhaps with a countdown timer, just to put you under pressure a little ^^) this size would be great! But now i think it slows down the pace of the level a little bit too much. I would definitely take some of the blocks away and make it a bit smaller. A little further on in the level, there's some sponges hanging from ropes, above a pool of water with toxic gas on it. The gas is colored black, and highly contrasts with the water. You should try making it blue, or blue-greenish so it fits better with the water. I think it will look much, much better! In the second part of the level (or third, depending on how you see it ;p) there's this piece of rock coming out of the wall with a bounce pad on it. I only found it after running around for 3 minutes, swimming back and forth a bit, running some more and finally jumping around. If it was supposed to be hidden so well, good job If it wasn't, then i would definitely do something about it! Further on in the level, just before the underwater mini game, the character says: "You will have to the game" or something like that. It looks like there's a verb missing Well, that was about all i could find.. You did a great job on the level, and i enjoyed it a lot! You can decide for your own if you want to do something about the points i just mentioned or not, it's your level Thanks Deurk for your detailed review and for your kind words! I fixed the dialogue before the underwater mini-game Also , I will probably make the memory game shorter and improve some stuffs the next time I got to lbp. Thanks for telling me your opinion , it sure helps me become more and more better !

2012-07-26 20:00:00 Author: Pyrotrooper91 Posts: 337

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Updated some cool features For example: sounds, camera changes etc.

2012-07-28 07:13:00 Author: Pyrotrooper91 Posts: 337

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Queued it, looks awesome judging by the pictures.

2012-07-28 07:34:00 Author: Sport_dude Posts: 622

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Great! Hope you enjoy

2012-07-28 11:51:00 Author: Pyrotrooper91 Posts: 337

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