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The Trail (Story-Platformer)
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| http://lbp.me/v/c22q2f At the edge of the Savannah there lies a trail which supposedly leads to the mystery of life... This my first attempt at LBP2 level and I'd love some feedback from you guys. It's a quick little level which shouldn't take more than 5 minutes but it has a cool mini-story, I hope, which is intended to get my feet a little wet as I'm a narrative creator  http://lbp.me/v/c22q2f EDIT: I've only just discovered the F4F system, I am happy to trade for feedback or any one of another person's levels =D | 2012-07-20 02:23:00 Author: Unknown User  |
| I just played it and there are a few things i would like to mention. The score bubbles seem misplaced. Get creative with them. Hang them on strings and place them more conveniently. I was a little annoyed with the bouncing. There is way too many bounce pads on the trees which made it slightly frusturating when i would miss one and fall all the way down. Throw in some detail in the trees and ground so they arent just straight materials. Go crazy but clean! Keep it up. Your level will be awesome with a few simple changes. Check out my inFamous Pinball http://lbp.me/v/cztnee | 2012-07-20 19:59:00 Author: curtislarkin  Posts: 157 |
| This level was good, but did not impress me at all though. The gameplay was just not much fun. There are way too many bounce pads. Players will get bored of that very quickly I am afraid. Also, I would always use infinite life checkpoints. There is nothing worse in my opinion than having to restart a level because of dying. I did like the story though. It was a good little yarn that kept me interested. I am sorry if I seem harsh. I understand this is your first level so please keep creating. You need honest criticism to get better, and you will get better. If you get a chance play my level Bludhaven. Here is the link. No hurry. Thanks! http://lbp.me/v/cne0-w | 2012-07-21 22:21:00 Author: VelcroJonze  Posts: 1305 |
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