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Hello, I present Born to fly, I hope you like it and enjoy it. It's an everyday story of an insect that has long been in my imagination. http://http://ia.lbp.me/img/bl/1ea16da59b9f57b6a23c7508fae6ec05ee0c357a.png (http://ia.lbp.me/img/bl/1ea16da59b9f57b6a23c7508fae6ec05ee0c357a.png) Sorry do not know how to insert the picture http://lbp.me/v/-bn7vk http://lbp.me/v/-bn7vk

2012-07-05 21:44:00 Author: The Cazarian Posts: 7

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Hey and welcome to LBPcentral! If you wouldnt mind returning the favour and reviewing my level: http://lbp.me/v/cffp5- Here's my review of your level: I like the starting, but the flying pink sparks look a but ugly because they are really long and thin because they are 3D. I think it would be better to make them 2D and put them on one of the flat layers. The design of the fly looks very clever and fun! And flying it felt quite easy too! The scenery was wonderful too. After eating the nectar, when the points stopped coming out: the nectar looked like it was still there! Shouldn't it go away? Also spamming R1 sounds really ugly when the sounds come every 0.1 seconds. Maybe put it so the sound can only play like once a second maximum. I loved the idea of the bee hive being checkpoints, very creative. I can see why this has been in your imagination. This is what LBP is about lol - turning your imagination in to a LBP level lol. When you reached the end of the the first part and had to ascend in an upper-left direction it looked very unnatural because the fly was still looking fowards. I imagine that would be tricky to fix, but I would think it almost neccessary. Then your fly did flip around and I was happy!!! Maybe make him turn around when you reach the end of the bottom. The caterpillars looked well designed and implemented.Again the spider was very creatively designed and looked very impressive. It was fun getting passed it, although simple. HAHA I loved the venus fly trap, I nearly fell for it. Creative and articulate. Excellent attention to detail. Again the frog, same thing as above! Really good. The ending part when you were entering a human environment looked ugly =[ I think it would be better to keep it the same cavern like feel and then end it. Here are some crazy ideas: Collecting enough nectar gives your fly more power! Powers like faster movement if u hold down say L1. Maybe it will obtain 3 pellets of 'bullets' whenever it eats nectar. Because right now even though the nectar is a nice addition I doesn't seem to be doing anything for the overall level. Overall excellent. This level should be played! Liked and Hearted.

2012-07-06 01:21:00 Author: Unknown User

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