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The forest (platformer)
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| http://lbp.me/v/cd34fp This is my  first platformer level! I create that with my best friend PyroTrooper91. This i created beacause the people didn't the beautiful forest and they burnt him!! Plz play my lvl!<3:star:http://lbp.me/v/The forest 40716 | 2012-07-04 10:10:00 Author: Unknown User  |
| You also double posted about your first platformer lol; there is another thread by you made consecutively adcertising the exact same thing. You should have just edited that one to add more information rather than semi-spam. Playing it and reviewing it live now. Review: The starting area is neat and looks nice. Which is a good impression obviously. The first area seems to be just for looks which isn't a bad thing, it looks pretty. Also when I start the level there is immediately no music. However if I go to the very LEFT when I first spawn then the music starts. Which is weird. The bridge on the waterfall looks too edgy, and thin . Also the left wall is uneven and it seems to me unnatural. Going on to the right, there appears to not be very much to do - thats the impression Im getting so far. The first button was upside down, and pressing it did nothing even though I can see some dissolve material above me? You sure you have thorougly tested this level? In the next area, if you skip the grab-on bit and contiune on to the very right, the camera lets you see outside the level. The square abrupt piece of fire seems very unnatural and should definitely be altered in shape. Then their were a set of spikes... The monster at the end didnt fight back at all, his not animated in any sense, and after you kill him he still talks.... Can't see the scoreboard at the end comes of as very unproffesional. Sorry but there seems to be major problems in this level. It had no aspect of gameplay and only had 3 areas of scenery which were extremely short. The monster at the end had no context and killing it meant nothing. You describe it as a platformer, but there is absolutely no platforming. Im sorry to be so harsh, but thats what I think. | 2012-07-04 12:03:00 Author: Unknown User |
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