Archive: 14 posts

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You guys i really need your help here it has been published for about 4 months now and only has 15 plays. I know it is one of my best levels it deserves credit. Please just go check it out and play if you don't like it fine, please tell me what i can do to make it better or if i should just take it off all together Thanks you guys!!! Sincerly, Ben21 http://lbp.me/v/v4vcq Level Link: http://lbp.me/v/-v4vcq Photos: http://lbp.me/p/qr3hvdv http://lbp.me/p/qr3b25m http://lbp.me/p/qr3b6ex http://lbp.me/p/qqbsy88

2012-07-03 22:22:00 Author: Ben21 Posts: 127

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I see you're new to the forum. When posting in this forum, you need to give us the link so that we can conveniently queue the level for when we go into the game. For everyone, here is the link to this level: http://lbp.me/v/-v4vcq Also, it'd be nice if you could put some pictures up. I'll play it in a little bit.

2012-07-03 23:04:00 Author: aar2697 Posts: 143

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Hey ben21. Here comes my review of your level. Also if you wouldn't mind reviewing my level =] http://lbp.me/v/cffp5- Anyways here's your levels review: You start off in a three layered object which has no form of shape and looks quite odd. Also, most of your level design seems to be composed of the default level background. DO NOT spam your level with community keys; I'm sorry but that is one of the unproffesional things I hate about levels. Please remove them or make them much smaller and actual secrets. Because this is a review, I am actively searching levels for glitches, both mechanical and in the level design. I have found a mechanical glitch. The first angel will FOREVER tell you to grab an object EVERY time you enter its range despite having picked one. The statue should only tell you to grab an object once, when you first begin the level. Which is likely what you desired. To ahcieve this make it so the angel is only triggered to say "Grab an object" one time - I would do this (using the LBP1 technique never having checked if their was a better one in LBP2 =p): Place a sensor and a sensor tag on, respectively, some dissolvable material and dark matter. Change the sensor tag to inverse; and make sure the sensor is in it's range. Attach the player sensor that would otherwise trigger the statue's speech on to the dissolvable material. Hence when the player enters the range, the material will dissolve and hence the tag will be gone forever. Because the tag sensor is on inverse, this will forever turn the tag sensor on, and will never reset. Attacth the output of the tag sensor to the magic mouth. If you already knew how to do that, then I wasted alot of time explaining =[ Also I had to restart this level because my settings dont let me collect community objects - and yours was needed for progression. When the water began to rise, I would have though there was some way to escape - but that's fine, its your level. The atlantis sign was there for way to long. It was too dark when swimming. There weren't really any aspects of obstacles or anything. The level seems to be centered around the idea of a STORY involving posiedon. Which is a cliche and the level design was lacking too. I'm sorry if you found this review harsh =[

2012-07-04 01:08:00 Author: Unknown User

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Hey Ben ! Welcome to LBPC , hope you have fun here exploring this amazing site To attract more people and get more plays , you should put a LBP.me link or a couple of pics Queued and I will check it out soon !

2012-07-04 07:34:00 Author: Pyrotrooper91 Posts: 337

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Ok thank you guys i am currently underway of improvements and i am confused on where you want me to add pictures. Do you want me to add them on the forum or on the game??? Thanks, Ben They mean add pictures to the forum so that people here can see what your level is about.

2012-07-05 02:08:00 Author: Unknown User

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They mean add pictures to the forum so that people here can see what your level is about. Srry new here how do i do that. Like add the photos.

2012-07-05 02:23:00 Author: Ben21 Posts: 127

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Srry new here how do i do that. Like add the photos. Okay, here it is step by step. 1. Take the photo's you want to post. Take these photos in-game. Do this using the camera tool. 2. Go to the photo in your pop-it menu in the stickers panel (towards the end). Press triangle to open up the options. Press upload. This will upload that picture to LBPme instantly. 3. Go to your LBPme profile and find these pictures, pretty easy to find them on your profile. Open them up all in new tabs. You should now only have that picture in your internet browser and nothing else in the screen apart from a plain background. 4. Edit your post above. Where you want to insert the images, type"[@IMG@]" (remove the @ signs so there are only the three letters inside the square brackets, you need the sqaure brackets too). Immediately after this copy-and paste the URL of ONE of the images you have opened in your tabs. Paste the URL after the "[@IMG@]" that you have written as described above. After pasting the url, type "[@/IMG@]". (Again, remove the @ signs and include the sqaure brackets, note the foward slash, this means you are ending the image.) 5. Repeat step 4 above to insert all your images. Done.

2012-07-05 03:58:00 Author: Unknown User

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Update/Upgrade done publishing new one in a few moments feel free to play again if you already have to see the improvements, or play again just to take the other path and see where it goes. To people haven't played yet i suggest you do now beacause I took the review i got into consideration and made it hopefully better. Thanks to FahadM for leaving a review of what to improve. Keys are now hidden through out the level so be on the look out for those too. PLAY ON!!!

2012-07-05 07:56:00 Author: Ben21 Posts: 127

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Old Review: when i first started I noticed how i was at the bottom of the level, its not that big of a deal but something just bugs me about how I can see the bottom edge of the create space. So then I walked to the right and was greated by an angel statue that told me to choose an item, so naturally i picked the mario star and obtained a a sticker prize. Then i walked through a pretty cool looking hall compared to where i started, only to find it littered with keys. So i continued down and found a fairly large room and was informed to make a tribute and place the thing i got from earlier. After placing the star sticker i suprised to find a mysterious voice inform me i angered him. But doesn't everyone liked mario? Anyways after that the water started to rise and once it reached the top i started to look for an escape route, after i died i learned my efforts were in vein do to the fact i had to die to move on to the next area, which ended up being a bland looking cave. So i swam to the end to find a strange air bubble titled atlantis. Though in effort to find an entrance i had to swim all the way to the other end and back to realise their was a tube at the front. After finishing the level I decided to go and take the other path hoping to please the god, only to be killed by gas and sent to heaven when i placed mu sacrafice. So then i walked right and found a path laid out in clouds. When i reached the end of it i came into a glitch, my sck would jump into one of the pillars whenever i tried to get in, and if i changed layers he'd fall and get electricuted. To sum it up i liked the level, it has potential. To make it more fun i'd have some puzzles that involves you getting to his throne room by carrying the sacrafice instead of using stickers. Once the tribute is placed make it so you'd either be deathlessly teleported away to the skys or have to swim away to escape his wrath.The artwork was good at some spots but very bland in others. But if you'd like i'd be glad to help you with the level if you want I'm great with logic and somewhat good at the scenery so just send me a friend request at Yusuke-Kuwabara and i'd be more then happy to help improve your level. New review: I'm glad to say I mostly liked the updates you added to the course. First off here's what i liked; I liked how you fixed the opening area to look more fitting into the setting then It did before. Also when i took the path in the clouds i could actually make it through the gates this time, yay. Mostly though you just updated the scenery wichh wasn't bad at all. Okay so I'm not sure if you saw my first review or not so i deleted it and put it down here, but i'm telling at least in my oppinion having puzzles that involve you taking the sacrafices through them to help solve them would be alot funner then just optaining a sticker and slapping it on. So as I said before deathlessly being teleported to the sky would be nice. Also the jellyfishes' pistons were showing you should make them invisble, and perhaps put the prize bubbles in a way that involve jumping to rack up the multiplier instead of just running. Also like before I'll help you you need any my psn is Yusuke-Kuwabara and also i posted i'll help on your atlantis level too.

2012-07-05 16:39:00 Author: SilverTriforce7 Posts: 183

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updates r out please leave more reviews

2012-07-13 07:23:00 Author: Ben21 Posts: 127

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I'll check your level out soon and give you my thoughts.

2012-07-15 01:11:00 Author: Unknown User

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I'll check your level out soon and give you my thoughts. Hey hope you have not forgotten to give a review as i need them to help support my level let me know what you think, also to others hoping to play my level give me reviews and there are also updates on the way.

2012-07-16 00:04:00 Author: Ben21 Posts: 127

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Updates are out and published don't forget i need reviews. I think these are the final updates unless scenery gets changed later. Enjoy. PLAY ON!!! Don't forget REVIEWS REVIEWS REVIEWS. Thanks Guys, Ben21 from Poseidon's Temple signing off.

2012-07-16 14:58:00 Author: Ben21 Posts: 127

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Hey guys Well i am finally making progress on one of the upcoming levels in this seris Atlantis (The Platformer) thats right I know you have all seen it saying 15% complete right beside Poseidon's Temple. I just dropped by to tell you all that this forum is now Feedback for Feedback so tell me what you think of Poseidon's Temple and i will give feedback on one of your levels. ALSO let me know if when i give you feedback if you want it to be on some forum on here or on my LBP2 Review show "Hidden Falls" Well thats all i wanted to say. SEE YALL SOON.

2012-07-25 01:15:00 Author: Ben21 Posts: 127

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