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For a guy who rarely indulged in LBP's music maker, this is a great feat! Obviously I used Youtube tutorials to help (I still had to work hard) but even still! The video was original though and I'm incredibly proud of it. So please give it a play and review. http://lbp.me/v/bkq1-7

2012-05-29 19:31:00 Author: craigmond Posts: 2426

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Ah, I love me some Keane. Will be sure to check this out.

2012-05-29 23:48:00 Author: kaiju_kid Posts: 329

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Bumpity Bump. Sorry, it just took so much effort, it hurts to see only one person has played it.

2012-05-30 15:43:00 Author: craigmond Posts: 2426

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I played it! And I enjoyed it. This was definitely an excursion from your previous levels, and I agree the music synth does take some getting used to. But you did a great job for your first attempt. And the deep emotional element you were able to convey was brilliant and captivating. I think you need to explore your potential further and do another. The only thing I can recommend is work to improve the timing of the instruments and ensure every note is correct. And another point to note is, no pun intended, your play to like ratio is over 40%, and that is something to be proud of.

2012-07-18 03:58:00 Author: RickRock_777 Posts: 1567

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Thanks you very much! That was a great review. I know what you mean about it needing to sound better with timing etc. And that's acctually what I have been working on, alongside a lot of other songs for a gallery, which will sound better, I hope. So thank you again!

2012-07-18 08:26:00 Author: craigmond Posts: 2426

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I played the level before this thread looking to find the song. I'm glad i picked yours. It has a very great depiction of how i imagined the song when i hear it on the radio. However timing could be a little better. But scenery and all was great. In my imagination I don't imagine someone dying I imagine in parallel to my life where me and my best friend have the special hidden place in an over grown woods and our spot has a water fall and flowers and a small pond/lake. And how i love her but she does not know and i am too afraid to tell her and so we escape to a place that only me and her know about where i feel that she loves me back. But yes great level thanks for taking your time to create it. If you would not mind reviewing my level "Poseidon's Temple" in this forum here that would be greatly appreciated. Forum link:https://lbpcentral.lbp-hub.com/index.php?t=72048-Poseidon-s-Temple

2012-07-19 22:28:00 Author: Ben21 Posts: 127

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The great reviews mean a lot, thank you! However, I'm sure timing can be fixed, I checked the bpm online and I'll check it again just to iron out anything that could be fixed regarding timing

2012-07-20 21:31:00 Author: craigmond Posts: 2426

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