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the green leaves are gone Missing all the memories Autumn please don't come my heart is crying Our mother is in great pain How can we save her? the leaves keep falling Our nature is in danger Still I'm just staring If you are soft to them The young sparrows Will poop on you Before I see green Today I see deadly air Tomorrow will end I chopped wood all day I bring poisonous basket Now butterflies are gone What to do with them, In this world of coarse matter ? Ah, the butterflies!? Creatures have homes they call it environment Humans ruin them Rain is a soother It drizzles from the heavens Makes our mind to calm Hug every tree you see Tomorrow wont be the same Green will turn to brown Flowers are growing I feel the wind blow past me My heart keeps smiling The seed is popping Sun is helping it to grow Let it live for years The sun is rising Thick blue sky is turning dark We should stay inside Let the moon appears As the shining light goes Let all close their eyes Spiders climbing up Keep falling from the strong wind Huge tall trees help them Sunlight melts the ice The water is rising high Sea is expanding

2012-05-22 19:09:00 Author: Unknown User

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Is this supposed to be a Haiku? because a few of the verses aren't 7 syllables.

2012-05-22 19:19:00 Author: Kern Posts: 5078

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Yes it's Haiku

2012-05-22 19:26:00 Author: Unknown User

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