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Flows - A Platform level based on creatures!

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http://lbp.me/v/7yt7bq2012-05-19 20:37:00

Author:
cakito123
Posts: 353

adding to the cool. sounds interesting.

EDIT: Playing now and will give some feedback. Don't take it personally, just giving things that I like and don't like.
The first thing I notice is the music box is visible and a bounce pad is laid on the floor. Just a pet peeve of mine, but a bounce pad just sitting atop the ground looks bad. maybe use the merge glitch and embed it into the ground or make a little box or something, wagon? for it to sit in. Ha! I like the little lift set into the wall. I don't think these multi-colored balls fits well with the theme that I'm seeing though. As I swing around this sponge I can't help but notice the unfinished edge of the level. Top left corner of this pic:

http://i0.lbp.me/img/ft/3b027c138cac091a5557960e4ede19452c5ef6aa.jpg

also, everything appears "blocky" or too square and straight. More corner editor. Ok, moving on, cool, I like these little characters I have to jump over to cross the gap and I like this stone dropping guy. Nice touch with the dirt kicking up when he falls. Wow, you used a lot of these kitty cat? pikachoo? that I have to bounce on their heads. I hope the animal rights people don't come after me. And the scoreboard.

Overall, not bad. Definitely room for some improvement, but overall good job.		2012-05-20 05:05:00

Author:
biorogue
Posts: 8424

adding to the cool. sounds interesting.

EDIT: Playing now and will give some feedback. Don't take it personally, just giving things that I like and don't like.
The first thing I notice is the music box is visible and a bounce pad is laid on the floor. Just a pet peeve of mine, but a bounce pad just sitting atop the ground looks bad. maybe use the merge glitch and embed it into the ground or make a little box or something, wagon? for it to sit in. Ha! I like the little lift set into the wall. I don't think these multi-colored balls fits well with the theme that I'm seeing though. As I swing around this sponge I can't help but notice the unfinished edge of the level. Top left corner of this pic:

http://i0.lbp.me/img/ft/3b027c138cac091a5557960e4ede19452c5ef6aa.jpg

also, everything appears "blocky" or too square and straight. More corner editor. Ok, moving on, cool, I like these little characters I have to jump over to cross the gap and I like this stone dropping guy. Nice touch with the dirt kicking up when he falls. Wow, you used a lot of these kitty cat? pikachoo? that I have to bounce on their heads. I hope the animal rights people don't come after me. And the scoreboard.

Overall, not bad. Definitely room for some improvement, but overall good job.

Haha, thanks for the feedback. This is a very old level, I think I published it 1 year ago... I just wanted to put all my levels here on the LBPC. I'll try to improve those things. Thanks again
I'm making a new level and is getting pretty Cool XD,

With your feedback I realized how much I grew as a creator in LBP2!		2012-05-22 18:06:00

Author:
cakito123
Posts: 353

Sounds great ! Got it queued 2012-05-23 12:42:00

Author:
Pyrotrooper91
Posts: 337


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