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Legend of Sackboy - Forest Village
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| This is my second level and the first of a series i'm making. This is a tutorial level, just learning the basics. Please play and give feedback so I can improve. Thank You! | 2009-01-03 19:31:00 Author: Sage  Posts: 2068 |
| Pros: -I like how when in the intro, it cut away to what it was talking about, nice touch. -Oringal Story -Mixxed things up with sticker switchs Cons: -I didnt like how the Envr't had such few details. decorations and NON BASIC MATERIAL are always good. -also try and make object or items in your level look good. I.E if you make a set of stairs make all stairs the same size and shape. NO JAGGED EDGEs. 3/5 Good Try My level Please | 2009-01-04 04:18:00 Author: Marcus--Aurelius  Posts: 8 |
| Alright, I liked the intro, I think you should change the color of disolve material in the tree house as well as making the switch invisible. I don't recommend the grass fabric that looks like astro-turf from the 60s. (No offense meant I just think it's kind of a dumb fabric) I recommend the floral fabric it looks much nicer and fits the fores theme better. I would change the material of what you crawl under to stone as well as add a wafer thin stone background to that part. I liked the chest that lit up a lot. I realize you might be hesitant to use music because it takes away from the zelda theme but if you are not willing to make the zelda music yourself via the music effects I recommend selecting some sort of LBP music. You can make some unique orchestra sounding songs with the cuztomizable tunes. Forgive the typos I am typing rather quickly. Speaking of typos I think I saw one in the level, the great tree says "Do you sence it" it should read "Do you sense it" thats all. | 2009-01-04 05:52:00 Author: Hexagohn  Posts: 335 |
| Actually the tree says "Dost thou sense it?" Or at least I hope it does. | 2009-01-04 06:13:00 Author: Sage Posts: 2068 |
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