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Tunnel up!!! - v1.01

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Tunnel up!!! - v1.01
PSN: blizzard_cool

It's a platforming stage that's been up like a month now. I just updated the stage with another ending.

I has a 4 star rating but a little number of plays and hearts and yet smaller number of comments... I would be glad if somebody would leave me feedback and give me some suggestions how could I make the stage better.

I have a video of it in it's early development stages. If anybody wants to see it I'm going to upload it gladly.
2009-01-01 16:27:00

Author:
blizzard_cool
Posts: 752


I think I have exhausted the search function trying to find and offer feedback on this level. I've tried everything I can think of and can't find it....2009-01-01 21:21:00

Author:
Jaeyden
Posts: 564


Id love to try it out, but i cant seem to find it because of the millions of ****-levels there are out there.

Can you please say where its located on the map and itll make things a bit easier ?
2009-01-01 21:24:00

Author:
taskig
Posts: 1


Search his PSN and go to page 2. You can find a level by him titled "king hut" on the Meditterranean Sea.

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My thoughts as I play the level:

- I usually don't give hearts to any level that says "Pease heart" anywhere in it, including description. What's sad is I guarantee at least half your hearts came from adding that bit. >.>

- That ride...it was so filled with excitement...

- Levels look better when you don't make switches visible.

- The second cart ride - My cart flipped over before even entering the tunnelish thing.

- I think you added some secret things by jumping on the guy instead of dragging him to the exit first. If so, bravo. I didn't check so I don't know if you did.

- A lot of the stuff seemed so pointless. Why am I grabbing this sponge to dissolve something next to me when it could be a puzzle or just walking straight through?
2009-01-01 23:42:00

Author:
BassDeluxe
Posts: 984


Search his PSN and go to page 2. You can find a level by him titled "king hut" on the Meditterranean Sea.

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My thoughts as I play the level:

- I usually don't give hearts to any level that says "Pease heart" anywhere in it, including description. What's sad is I guarantee at least half your hearts came from adding that bit. >.>

- That ride...it was so filled with excitement...

- Levels look better when you don't make switches visible.

- The second cart ride - My cart flipped over before even entering the tunnelish thing.

- I think you added some secret things by jumping on the guy instead of dragging him to the exit first. If so, bravo. I didn't check so I don't know if you did.

- A lot of the stuff seemed so pointless. Why am I grabbing this sponge to dissolve something next to me when it could be a puzzle or just walking straight through?
The peas heart was an accident. I fixed it a long time ago but it did stay on the stage in my moon
- Nah, I liked it that way. Some of the switches r visible in the story mode stages like in Bunker
- It's supposed to flip. Well if you make it to the finish without fliping you just get more points
- Yes I did. The next stage in the series will be.... Didn't think of the name yet but it's going to be something with snow or mountain
- then it would be no fun
2009-01-02 14:25:00

Author:
blizzard_cool
Posts: 752


I agree with much of what BassDeluxe said on this one. While your level was moderately fun, too much of it didn't make any sense to me. Some suggestions:

-The little cart rides seemed pointless. If you do this again any time soon, stretch out the ride a bit or make it so the cart actually goes over something hazardous so there is a point to it.

-The random grabbing of sponge to dissolve, and especially that swinging sponge that opens up the dissolve during the race have to go in my opinion. They just don't make any sense being there.

-Watch for grammar errors in your dialogue. I caught a few, but cannot bring them to mind at the moment.



While I may seem negative about your level, I'm only giving suggestions on how you could improve upon your next one. The level was easy to play, had some fun elements to it, and can be enjoyed by anyone. 3.5/5 stars, but I rounded it up and gave ya 4
2009-01-02 16:10:00

Author:
Neverynnal
Posts: 374


I agree with much of what BassDeluxe said on this one. While your level was moderately fun, too much of it didn't make any sense to me. Some suggestions:

-The little cart rides seemed pointless. If you do this again any time soon, stretch out the ride a bit or make it so the cart actually goes over something hazardous so there is a point to it.

-The random grabbing of sponge to dissolve, and especially that swinging sponge that opens up the dissolve during the race have to go in my opinion. They just don't make any sense being there.

-Watch for grammar errors in your dialogue. I caught a few, but cannot bring them to mind at the moment.



While I may seem negative about your level, I'm only giving suggestions on how you could improve upon your next one. The level was easy to play, had some fun elements to it, and can be enjoyed by anyone. 3.5/5 stars, but I rounded it up and gave ya 4

Well thx for the 4 star rating.
Ok the grammar part. I'll try to find the errors.
But the cart, as said, is just for the better score (I got the best score on my own stage lol).
And the dissolve material? Ok I know it's kinda random but it makes the stage better and funnier. Don't u agree?
2009-01-02 17:07:00

Author:
blizzard_cool
Posts: 752


And the dissolve material? Ok I know it's kinda random but it makes the stage better and funnier. Don't u agree?

Naw man I personally don't. It's overly simple and not needed, but of course it's your call. It doesn't really take away or add anything to the level, so leaving it in doesn't really hurt anything I suppose.
2009-01-02 17:19:00

Author:
Neverynnal
Posts: 374


I just gave this level a try as I was asked to test a different level by bliz. I liked his work so much I thought I would try another level, and chose this one.

I really liked the level. It was really random and fun, and overall I really enjoyed it and had a lot of laughs.

There was one spelling error I saw hiding in the speech bubbles. "Than you big times" was said by the first miner after you helped him when he was stuck.

There was a part where a contact bomb is spawned and you have to drop it down with a jetpack. I missed it the first time and found the respawn for it was very, very slow, like several seconds. You might want to look into speeding up the time gap so the level is not bogged down.

There was a part where you grab a sponge and swing on it to press a button, which dissolves the next bit to continue on. I could hardly see the button and didn't notice it when I was first in that area, and felt stuck. Maybe if you shined a subtle spot light on it might help with the flow a bit more.

Overall though, once again it was a great level and I really enjoyed it. I loved some of the humour you used, it was great.
2009-01-29 10:29:00

Author:
Elbee23
Posts: 1280


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