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Dark Everest

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Soo... I finally turned my ideas into reality by creating my first level Dark Everest. I published this level before as Little Big Everest Adventure, then after awful but honest feedback from the friends saying, its too hard, long, frustrating, etc. I deleted it from the Community Planet and did an extensive redesign and implementation session. I think i've created my best work, but I need your help LBPCen.
If any of you get a few minutes spare, could you check it out, and probably give me some feedback. I would really appreciate it. Thanks!
2008-12-31 20:50:00

Author:
rocketi05
Posts: 80


Pretty good level m8 Here's what I have to say about it:

Pros

-definitely provided a decent challenge. I had a pretty tough time in some parts but it wasn't really annoyingly hard that I wanted to quit.

-The materials you used fit the level quite nicely.

-Nice humour Fred was pretty cool hah!

- It ran smoothly, which is very important in a level that's strictly platforming. Great work here!

Cons

- Your message at the start "this level is long may take an hour ect ect" should be removed. People see this and may quit the level right then and there. Besides it took me just over 10 minutes

- The level doesn't feel like Everest. Maybe at the beginning, but later it just turns into another frozen/tricky level. I think the reason it didn't feel like it is you never reach the "peak", and rather just the finish after a tedious maze. Maybe change the story or have a 2nd part on the way with an explanation . I'm heavy on story, and it just kinda tails off in this level Love the concept though.

-I didn't quite understand the part where I blew up after your message "you have a lot of lives sackboy ect ect."


So in conclusion, I liked the level, it provided a pretty good challenge, but it didn't blow me out of the water. Keep it up though and maybe expand on this!
2008-12-31 22:39:00

Author:
Neverynnal
Posts: 374


Thanks alot for that honest judgement, i played it again and realise what you meant by some of your con points, i really appreciate that, i will change a few things bearing in mind what you said and probbally make a sequel, explaining the story more, if a few thousand people find time to play it.2009-01-01 14:35:00

Author:
rocketi05
Posts: 80


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